Reviews for Everything That Rises
The Awesome Coyote chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
That was just an amazing. Words can't describe how amazing this is.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
i hate Jack Frost!
trajik007 chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
...Damn. That was really, really good.
Merina Thropp chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
(I don't ship Blackice, so I skipped huge chunks of this, but the parts I did read were phenomenal, so bravo, mate!)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Amazing. I literally have nothing else to say.
Ash-Bookworm113 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
So full of emotion. Oh gosh it was wow. Depressing and uplifting...
Lexi chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
You are so amazing! This is what would have happened if RotG had been rated R. I would totally have seen it! Even though I probably shouldn't! Keep being the most awesome person alive, please.
The Naiads chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
I HATE YOU, that is rephrase my sentence: I HATE YOU and I LOVE YOU.
I have read all your stories , and despite the sadness of the plot and the final, there was always something good in them, that made you finish the story with a smile.
But now I read this story, and the ending is the most sad that I've ever read about this fandom (even worse than the end of the film) .
That is, here not only the good guys win without learning anything (except Jack), but here Pitch loses everything with nothing with which to console himself , immediately after being BETRAYED and ABANDONED by the person with whom he had tied up, and tried to have a family (even if in a way a little contorted), and don't speak just of rape.
Now he will be trapped in that cage, alone with nothing and no one waiting for him, once freed?! It is not fair çAç.
How could you write an ending so sad and without a sequel to risolevare the morale of those poor human-beings , who like me are crying, right now ç_ç! Why yes , your story made me cry and tighten the heart, in a vise too painful for ignore it.
For this I am reviewing: TO VENT THE PAIN THAT YOU SUCCEEDED IN MAKE ME FEEL è_é. You proud of yourself, there are very few people who are able to shock me so much.
Now all I can say is: congratulations your story (however painful) is magnificent w. Always continue in this way, I highly recommend XD
SEE YA

P.S: sorry for my english /
aPassionateLife chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
This is a very unique and one of a kind stories that you don't often come across. From the language and images used to the twisted plot line it rings true to the story, and characters. Jack and Pitch are the same, but they did decide to take different paths in becoming seen. Most people dismiss the darker side of Pitch for something more genuine and good, but Pitch is evil, with a selfish intent. While Jack, though misled, has a good heart and wants to set things right. I absolutely loved this story. So different from everything else I have read that is BlackIce. Little secret, I loved Jack's vengeful sex, it fit so well for the moment. So well. Absolutely loved it. Can't say enough about it. It was at the perfect pace, amazing fluency, and a great, great idea. As I said, not enough praise for this. It is a shame that this doesn't have more reviews and favorites, because this really is unique and simply amazing.
Never stop writing
-De
MasteroftheTides chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
This was not sad.
It's surprising, life lesson-ey, and cold but not sad.
May Eve chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
God. Damn. o_o
GG chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Beautiful ending…really…
redolivia chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
I haven't been able to stop reading this since I started! I love how you portrayed Jack. Great story
Candle Joker chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
I'm surprised that this only have 8 reviews... O_o because this was the best ROTG oneshot I've read so far. A lovely amount of angst and the heart warming scene where Jamie and Sophie see Jack for the first time :')
ItsSkiBitches chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
I was hoping him and pitch ended up together!
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