poor Harley

I love your story the plot and story line are great but you really have to ask someone to edit your grammar

Lemon ! Lemon ! Lemon !
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This is starting to be good :D characters are totally realistic, the "lust-fear" look in Harley's eyes is just as I would have imagined! Oh and also, watch out for mistakes with past tense ;)