I am stunned. I really don't know what to say about this chapter. Short, yes, but not sweet at all. You have left me with a very big question mark on my brow.

Looking at how you are playing with my thoughts and emotions, I just have to compliment you. Your plot is keeping me reading.

Oh no!

What is wrong with Jane? Did she take a stupid pill? I want to grab her by the shoulders and shake her.

Oh wait... *scratches head* You are doing this on purpose. Making the reader wonder if Jane has totally lost it, or if she is playing Maura in order to judge her reaction. Thereby being in a position to determine if it is worth putting their friendship on the line for the possibility of having a deeper and more meaningful relationship with Maura.

Kikiki... What a royal misunderstanding by Maura. LOL

Jane has feelings for Susie? WTF? Really!?

I did not expect this at all! You have blown me out of the water.

[Maura looked into Jane's dark orbs, her voice dripping with lust "Jane, my tongue can be used for so much more."]

Oh Maura. Jeje

Oh No this cannot be done. No. I though this was gonna be a long slow burner. This happened so fast. But damn it it was great. Sexy times with rizzles is always great to read.

I really wanted to read more tho. Like what happened with Susie. What Angela thought of rizzles. More rizzles like romantic rizzles. I enjoyed the read tho.

[With eyes wide, Jane couldn't believe what she was hearing coming from Maura's room. She inched closer to the bedroom door and felt guilty, and a little dirty, for listening in. Jane's body was pressed against the hardwood of Maura's bedroom door; her left palm pressed against it. Jane was transfixed by she was hearing. Her shock is what made her call out to Maura as she heard the blonde climax. "Maura?" "Oh God!"]

Lol.

["Yes Jane, I heard you quite clearly." Maura snapped. "I just don't understand why you felt the need to tell me after-" "Because you are my best friend and …and I kissed HER," Jane shouted "She didn't kiss me back!"]

Jane really your gonna tell Maura this.

["Are you ,Jane? Are you looking for someone else?" "No. I mean, I didn't think I was." Jane began pacing back and forth, Maura just watched her. "Geez Maura! I just got used to the idea of having feelings for a woman and she turns me down. How am I supposed to deal with that type of rejection? Then on the drive over here I start thinking, thinking about you and yesterday and what Susie said and…" Jane sat down on the bed with her head in her hands. "I'm just so confused."]

Oh goodness this is gonna be torture. This Jane is gonna be annoying lol.

["Jane I know how I feel because what I feel for you is what I felt for Ian, only more. When I am not near you it hurts. It physically hurts me to the point that I want to cry out. When I am alone my thoughts always go to you and how I wish you were with me. When we are together I am just happy sitting next to you watching TV or reading or hearing you complain about your Angela" Maura laughed softly. "It's no different than what, I assume you feel for Susie. "]

Nope I cant with this OUCHY it hurts.

["I have never felt this way about any man I have ever dated." She kissed Jane's wrist, " I have never had these types of feelings for a woman either." She pulled Jane in closer to her. "Why can't we just make each other happy," Maura kissed Jane's cheek, "and be confused together?"
Maura looked into Jane's eyes and then softly kissed Jane on the lips.]

Omg. Oh goodness Maura breaks my heart. Maura kissed her ... ahhhhh.

Omg this chapter tho. Lol I'm sorry I just can't believe Maura just ... and Jane was so close to the room or .. lol wow. I cant wait to read the next.

["She thought about the conversation she had with Susie. She said Jane only felt this way because Susie wasn't threatening. What if Maura did not really feel for Jane this way? What if Maura was just latching on to Jane because of her messed up relationships. What if…]

Jane is so oblivious I swear.

[Now that Jane thought about it she was in that situation again. She had just told Susie she had feelings for her. Susie did the same thing to Jane that Jane did to Maura. However, Susie thought about Jane's feelings first. Then it hit Jane what Susie was telling her. Susie did have feeling for Jane! She just did not want to open herself up if Jane had feelings for Maura.]

So wait a minute Jane does have feeling for Maura right? Oh oh Susie has feelings for Jane. This just got oh oh.

["Susie slowly turned to look at her, "Detective, I have worked around you for quite some time and in that time there is one thing, one normalcy that I have seen and that is your relationship with Dr. Isles" Susie stopped to see if she should continue. She knew the Detective had a temper and she did want to incite it. "I think the feelings you think you have for me, may actually be feelings for someone else. You may just be transferring onto me because I am...not as threatening ... Detective I understand. But, I could tell the moment you kissed me I wasn't who you were thinking of."]

I love Susie for this. Susie is attractive cant blame Jane but how can she not see Maura Isles wow. I did like that Susie told Jane that her true feelings might be for Maura.

I just seen the reviews and people seriously need to take a chill pill or grow up. If you don't like what you read just stop reading and read something else. And stop insulting the characters and the writer. I'm here for Rizzles but Not everything in life is rainbows n butterflies. Idk if the writer did promise rizzles will be endgame or not cause I didn't read the AN last night. But if she did I'll keep reading. I'm a masochist when it comes to stories I love slow burners. Whatever...

So far I'm intrigued. Lets see.

So Jane does know how Maura a feels :( poor Maura. Omg Jane kissed Susie let's see how that goes.

Wait what?

["It's just-I didn't know I could feel this way about... I mean she's a woman." "Yes, she is Jane." Maura said plainly. "I mean I have never been attracted to a woman."]

Damm Jane keeps saying shit like that and I just feel for Maura. Omg when Maura started kissing Jane neck and Jane moaned tho. Ahhh. Asdfghjkl. How can Jane be so oblivious.

OMG AAAAHHHHHHHHHH SUSIE. DID NOT EXPECT THAT AT ALL. OH THIS IS GONNA BE GOOD. I'm intrigued.

spontaneous combustion, hotter god chapter, look forward to a new story Rizzles, this was very, very hot.

I love this so far you have to update soon. i got to know what happens. this story is just get hot :)

I just can't see Jane and Susie