you probably read it in Peeps by Scott Westerfield

Thank you for the story. :)

Fantastic, haunting, bloody brilliant. fantastic prose and i'll admit i skipped most of the author's notes but only because it flowed so well. Absolutely beautiful. Loved it deeply. But i just cant see crookshanks and mrs norris as a couple. ;) but thank you so much, i guessed and hoped for a similar end but nothing written so well. Has the feeling of a proper fantasy that sucks you in and makes you think.

"What?" Hermione asked, quite clearly confused. Her mind suddenly caught onto his rapid, angry stream of thoughts, and she stood up out of her chair, backing away. He didn't want her. He didn't want her! He was uncomfortable, embarrassed with her! Everything she had worked so hard for had been a lie! "I-" she faltered, biting her lips to keep back the emotions that threatened to spill out of her panicked, hurt mind.

Men are really clueless...

If they don't manage to say at least one stupid thing a day they get a strange itch... Even exceptionally gifted and intelligent men like Severus...

I've always loved the Lady of Shalott so I couldn't not like your story

Incredible! This was quite the journey! And quite the mind trip. Thanks for that! Is there going to be a conclusion with the cliched "happily-ever-after" ending? Or are you just going to leave it as is? If you ask me, I'm kind of hoping for a "happily-ever-after" ending by way of snarky, pig-headed, and lusty means. After all, the declorative words "I love you" were left unsaid and only implied, which is pretty mandated in any sort of "love" story. Ya know?

I read the poem. Loved it :)

I love this story, and truth be told, I'm kind of a prude, but I read this despite the rating because I ADORE The Lady of Shalott and this pairing, but (yes, another but) Chapter 7 was EWIE.

That was really beautiful. keep up!

HAHA! that was a funny ending! I could kind of, almost see it coming.

okay, please don't hate me for this, but i have some...comments, to use a neutral word

firstly, I like the whole scene at the Riddle house, especially the part where Voldemort has the family pictures all neatly placed face down every where. however, if you remember, Tom Riddle Sr., voldie's daddy dearest, was a muggle, and so he wouldn't actually have moving, magical pictures in his house.

secondly, i just have to bring this up. your story is so very well-written, and it is obvious that you have invested a lot of time and thought into its creation. it is because of this that I plead to you: don't be in such a hurry to wrap it up! Both in the scene where Voldemort dies and the part where Snape pushes away hermione and is rebuked by pomphrey are just too fast. It feels like, you just want us to get the gist of it, but aren't allowing( or perhaps i should say enabling) the reader to experience the moment as fully and completely as it is. I still love your story, but climaxes are a bit of a let-down.

be cause I hate to leave a review on a less-that-sickeningly-cheerful note, plese know that your story has reinspired me to do somee reasearching of my own! Happy thursday.

May you continue to write and explore your abilities.

-Coriander

nice and deep

please write a sequel i love this story!

Wow! That was awesome. The ending was kinda anti-climatic but still, wow that was great. Umm you may want to update some of your story since as you probably know by now the Riddles would never have had a magical photographs. But that's all. A fabulous piece of work Madame!

wonderful! i just wish there was more

oh...oh! i think i may have just got it!

i love your little call to arms at the end there about rape. it's interesting, in a twisted way, the allowences we make for women and not men. take buffy the vampire slayer for example. in the sixth season, she starts a violent sexual relationship. if it had gone the other way, spike beating her and using her for sex, society would have called 'foul!' but because it was a woman abusing a man, it was ok. rape is viewed in much the same way it seems.