I'm happy you wrote again
Please write again soon

Awww that's sweet 3 :)

Please weite again

Looking forward to more!

ASDGHJKL HANNA

I just choked on my yoghurt while reading this because I didn't expect a SQUEEE to come out of my mouth at the same time but it was all worth it because this is SUGAR! I love the idea of Kíli being jealous and Fíli stealing his first kiss from him 3

"But she kissed you. She stole your first kiss and it should have been mine." - absolutely beautiful line! I love the whole chapter 3

I don't know why people need to complain all the time about what people ship, if you don't like it don't read it.

I really enjoyed this fanfic, it was very sweet and cute and lkaejtjathkajet I will never grow tired of these two being all cuddly!

So yeah, write more! :D

I'm really sorry about the negative feedback. It's terrible to think people read something they know will not go down well and then criticise it.

i like your story. It's sweet and not too overt about their relationship.

I do wish you'd continue. Even if people are horrid. I know I've had people say the same thing to me about certain pairings and to be fair my understanding is that if they can't take it, they shouldn't read it.

Whatever you decide don't let them discourage you.

Rhea

I would like to continue with your story. Please link me to the continuation :)

Kissing is *not* smut. This was wonderful.

Well that was disappointing I was all set for a nice story about the brothers growing up and it turned out to be smut.

Such a sweet story. I like seeing characters when they are younger, and I especially like the brotherly love Fili and Kili have for each other.