Awesome

You almost always say that you hate the chapter. Don’t doubt yourself; you’re an amazing writer! Keep it up.

Dude I don’t know how you could hate this chapter
I love it

the story is awesome! i wish u wrote a sequel...

Dimbledore didnt punish black for trying to kill snape and that was without monetary bribinh why would he do it to rosier?

I wish Sev lived but all in all, great story. It was wonderful.

I love this story, it's so creative and is an interesting play on Canon. the only downfall as far as I am concerned is that some characters are a bit ooc, eg. dumbledore. as funny as this chapter was, as the headmaster of a school he could not leave a student hanging upside down etc. he could perhaps take him down but not take points from anyone, or maybe wink at the marauders or something instead. love this story though, and I don't want to sound like I am complaining. I just want to help you improve it with some constructive criticism!

Thanks - I'll use that.
I'll tell u when I upload it.
Have you written anything else?

Hi, I would vote for your story but I think I have to log in to vote. Good luck!
I've finally finished and it's awesome.
Won't Harry's parents still bing alive change the future? Because Harry only really wants to kill Voldemort to revenge his family - and Aron saved Harry's life quite a lot.
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Loved it though.
I've followed you - so please write more!

I thought Nevilles parents didn't die but were at St Mungos?

I loved this chapter! I laughed so much at the teachers reactions.

I LOVE THIS STORY!
*actually having trouble breathing*
Loving Severus's POV

Cool

Yay! It was a fix-it! I'm sad that some more characters had to die, but less sad. This was amazing!

I don't usually review in the middle of a story, but I just wanted to say that I'm kinda hoping for a fix-it story and if it isn't I'm going to me sad.