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This is interesting.

Hi

Such a lovely story! Thank you for finishing it ( :

Aahhh freaking love this!

I'm sure this story had a sequel? Might be confused with a different story XD This is great btw!

And I freakin love this story! Funny, sexy, sweet and interesting. I love how you made it light-hearted and fun while still adding in conflict.
I am looking forward to reading the rest :D

...hum... it's so strange ! I know your story, like I know the principal facts but I was totally know to the story Q I mean, reading it all, I wasn't feeling like I've already read it. Anyway. It's strange. But it was awesome, AWESOME!
This is immediately going into my favorites !

hiyana

I FUCKING KNEW IT THERES INCEST

Implied incest damn

Naruto watching Sasuke while he put his hair up and noticing his slender and feminine his features was just like a scene straight out of a yaoi manga. That's not a compliment.

Yaoi has terrible tropes which unnecessarily feminize the so-called bottoms to make the stories be as close to a het relationship as possible. The fact that there even has to be a set top and bottom is all you need to know about how het-oriented yaoi actually is.

Actual heterosexual relationships are far less rigid than yaoi is, and actual women are far less stereotypically feminine than ukes are. You should never base how you write gay pairings off of yaoi. The yaoi tropes in this fic are turning me off so hard I don't think I'm going to be able to finish this fic.

I am sorry I have this much and have not said a word it's a great story

Love it much. Thank fic

First of all i luved it. Secondly i luv that u write so long for 1 chap coz all of the fits i read are short. Thirdly i always love a fic wit so must passion and emotion not like most fics that r just about them fucking. Fourthly u the best ever!

I loveeee your fanfiction. It creates so many emotions and tones. I never even considered Naruto x Sasuke before reading this! But now its my favorite ship! Keep writing :)