Amazing, truly amazing.

Lovely! I think that it captured him quite well and it was written nicely.

awesome story! i really like it :3

I love all the KanamexYuki stories you write. :D
Keep it up c:
-Neko

Wow! I liked this very, very much. So very different in both the style that you wrote in and the basis of your story. I liked that slightly darker edge coupled with that soft, lingering melancholy. Great stuff. Look forward to more stories from you.