That was an amazing story

The men's home must be really close to each other else how can Jasper clearly. I know his blinds or d drapes I forget which are transparent but I thing the pervy boy is using binoculars.

Wow that was so sweet and tender and poignant. I am rereading I missed the part about Jasper never experienced before. So we learn right away that Jasper is a virgin. Edward is 6'1" not six foot three. If we're going with the canon.

Great story I loved it a lot. Very sad that Edward's father wasted all that time opening the letter. Fyi, although the distinction is rarely used today blonde with the final E is for females. For males the spelling is blond. Glad Jasper didn't accept Jacob's attention.

I thought Jasper was going to take Edward to hospital. Kind of sad ppl gay and straight see only their own experience without noticing the successful relationship all around them.

Im not one bit fond of slutty whorish Edward or Jasper for that matter, but I sqwee when they meet and suddenly realize how empty their lives are without each other. So yup happy camper.

Just wonderful.

Cute. Thanks

I've never read about any of these characters before. I've only read Harry Potter and Star Trek fan fics, and recently, one Buffy the Vampire Slayer. I've never read Twilight or seen the movies, so I had no preconceived notions of what the characters are like. I only know what they look like in the movies, thanks to media saturation.

But I read, anyway, intrigued by the summary. I saw this story on a Harry Potter fan's favorites list. It was a lovely story with a tone that really pulled me in and helped me visualize these characters that I didn't know. I doubt I'll ever read the actual canon stories. That Bella girl doesn't sound like my kind of heroine. And I've read The Host, and if that's an example of the author's writing, I don't think Twilight will be my thing. But I am very glad I read this.

This is too sweet it's too good I am crying literally why must I cry why do you make me cry why. I love this so much you should be incredibly proud this is too good i hate it I love it I died.

Oh this was so heartwarming! Loved the letter. Great t see Jasper and Edward had their family.

Awe. Love these guys and this story too!

This is a beautiful story. Short, but that's good because only the necessary parts are written.

Beautiful and sad at the same time. So good to see the boys "in the future" - it left me "ooh" and "ahh"ing them all the time...

Very well done, Dani! 3 3

Loving the quick start but then slowed down pace. Edward's ambivalence is interesting...keeps things from moving too fast in one direction. Yum.