Aw. That was cute. Took that standard stuck in an elevator cliche and had fun with it. Which is what one should do with cliches, I think.

I like the fact that the story worked, even without knowing a damn thing about the previous B/X relationship. Ya just used their character traits to map out reactions. Or that's the way I read it. Anyway, was fun and funny. Nice work.

I like it!By the way,I am a fan of you your fanfictions.

Awww! Wonderful!

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