I know it's been several years since you posted, but I really have enjoyed this. It would be great if you could just wrap it up. But either way, good job!

Mkay... So I know that you haven't updated in 2 years... But I just got around to reading this and it was AMAZING!
Seriously! I love your others too, and I can't find it in me to beg for you to write more on this one because it'll take time from working on 'I May Be Dead, But I'm Still Pretty'...
Anyway, I loved all of the interactions with Death. That's even better than I've ever imagined it being done! And then with Pitch and Anna... Wow. Great job. And I love how you were setting up the Cavity. First ten or so chapters I just kept thinking, How can this possibly become a Cavity story? but you really did make it Cavity right there, and I love it.
Okay, I'm done! Loved the book, and I hope you magically get an eighth day of the week so you have time to continue this!

As www! Amazing! Continue. I laughed like an idiot about the part when Grim took his eyebrows that my mom shouted me " shut Up!"
I love really your stories, i am your fan...;-)

3X please update again soon! I love this story so much!

Oh my goodness this is amazing and deep and awsome yet angsty and touching all at the same time! Pleeaaassee continue!

God I love this story... please update it.. I wanna read more of Pitch's memories!

This is a pretty good story. Please update soon.

Please update soon this is such a good story.

This is an amazing story. Keep up the good work, and update soon.

I've spent several years now roaming fan fiction now, and I've only reviewed, or commented on one other story. This is an impressive piece of fan fiction you are writing, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

I gess I never reviewed your story *coughs*, but I have to do now, because I follow it the whole time, and I love it. Please keep it up, love the idea! )

Wow...that was deep, man.

I really like this other side of Pitch you made, it's very realistic. and Tooth finally understanding why he is how he is is very relieving.

Grim is still crazy scary, and how Pitch keeps whining for his eyebrows is very funny :D

Adding the 'power thing' is really original! Unique idea! I love it!

Lovely chappie, dear, and *pulls out firearm and green notebook* ya ain't gettin' ma notebook now! HAHAHAHAHA! *burns notebook*

Keep writin'!

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You wonked me on the HEAD?! I'll be blind! Isn't it enough I have to wear glasses?
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