I love It!

Really beautiful! Thank you for sharing it

I really liked it! One question tho, why is the language set as 'Dutch' while this story obviously isn't written in Dutch...

I actually have scientific theories on how each person (child) of each god, specifically the seven have there power. I already have on Percy of course. But the hardest one will probably be Nico and his ability to raise the dead.

Sooooooo good! You should write more like this, I love them.

I like your writing style...it's very creative. Good job.

I love the story! I love the Percy-Posiedon bond! :-)

I liked this.

This is a great story! It was well put together, it was a very pleasurable read. You had a great idea for this story! One note, apologize is spelled with a z not an s.

Thanks for reading this review,
Otaku

I liked it. That was a nice touch, bringing Poseidon to talk to Paul.