Reviews for Life or Betrayal
Guest chapter 11 . 3/13
I always check back everyone half a year or so too see if you’ve updated, I started reading this when I was 12 and I’m 18 now and it’s still one of the best plot lines I’ve read on this site. I hope your finish it one day!
ThunderClanWarrior502 chapter 10 . 12/10/2019
Uuugh, that Benedict Arnold pun is back again!

I enjoy Shark Week on Animal Planet... Sometimes.
ThunderClanWarrior502 chapter 5 . 12/9/2019
*deep breath*
Not a fan of that Benedict Arnold thing you made up...
ThunderClanWarrior502 chapter 9 . 9/14/2019
It's about TIME someone believes Mikey! I mean, Splinter I believed him from the start, but I'm glad Leo finally came through.

I am utterly shocked that Donnie is part of this. I never thought he'd be capable of such atrocities. With Raph, I'm not entirely surprised, but Donnie?!

*sighs* Unbelievable. Just unbelievable. I am so disappointed in him.
ThunderClanWarrior502 chapter 3 . 9/14/2019
*sighs* Well, it was fun while it lasted. It was good until the end.
ThunderClanWarrior502 chapter 2 . 9/14/2019
I just remembered that I accidentally skipped this chapter. After reading the last part I was all like,
"YAAAS! I KNEW HE WAS TELLING THE TRUTH!"
ThunderClanWarrior502 chapter 11 . 9/10/2019
Going good so far, but think you can update this whenever possible? I'm really liking this.
ThunderClanWarrior502 chapter 7 . 9/10/2019
"You could drop dead at my feet right now and I wouldn't bat an eye about it."

Marçel would practically KILL someone for saying things like that! I, however, would've been ready to slap Leo at this point. What kind of big brothers do they think they are!? My god, I hope the four make amends soon.

However, after reading this far, fan fictions with this much conflict, a potential group hug, and an actual section where emotions are spilled (if you know what I mean) is what makes me love reading fanfics so much. I think of an innovative way to write my first fanfic, and this is giving me a few pointers. Even though the boys are being total buttheads right now, I. Am. Loving. This.

One more thing; it has come to my attention that this hasn't been updated since 2014.
tmntlover2013 chapter 11 . 5/23/2019
Great job on the story, so far please update as soon as you can thanks
Ta'Nyia Holley chapter 7 . 7/24/2018
Okay, this story is good so far! It makes me feel like I'M Mikey and makes me feel sad and good at the same time when Donnie, raph, and Leo would get hit over the head! But I have a question! I'm 14 and I want to help my family out, so I'm doing a fundraiser on GoFundMe! If you wanna donate, or share to the people who can donate? My link and full story is here! And donate as much as possible!
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CONTINUATION chapter 11 . 6/7/2018
OMG, I HAVE NO FEELINGS FOR THIS CHAPTER IM MAD ABOUT DONNIE AND RAPH, BUT I'M ALSO HAPPY ABOUT WHAT LEO DID, AND THERE NEEDS TO BE NUMBER 12 PF THIS OR MORE!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/21/2018
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IVE BEEN WAITING FOR YEARS
Bluebeard315 chapter 11 . 4/3/2018
Please update this, I know it's been 4 years and all, but this is honestly one of the best stories i've ever read on TMNT. Please update!
SuperStar58 chapter 6 . 3/3/2018
this has turned into a cinderella story in seconds
punzi chapter 11 . 12/17/2017
Can you pretty please update more chapters pretty please with chocolate sprinkles on top
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