Good story. I wouldn't trust Rose at all and she'd never see her again.

This was really great i hope to read more of your stories .

i'm glad esmee is dead, it was time to take her life for what she has done.

Why is Alice ALWAYS in the middle of everyones relationships? I feel like if they're mates then fate will figure it out and it needs no interference from alice.

Edward's possessed of Bella sealed his death warrant. So Jasper's killing of Edward was so quickly over it was
anticlimactic. But he is gone.

Edward's maniacal obsession with her is out of control. Esme is blind to Edward.

Threats from Carlisle. Suicidal Bella

Geeeezzzz menacing cruel threatening letter from Edward and now Jake's in her face. Can the girl catch a break? No one could clean Charlie's house after he was killed.

Scared on both their parts one step forward one back.

Plow wet Jasper

So much love. So many obstacles.

Talking. First step.

So nervous both of them for different reasons.

Love Peter. Rough but the best friend.

So much for Bella and Jasper to work through. Good thing, they have Jasper's friends.