Reviews for Crystal
Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 1 . 8/20/2018
I LOVE LOVE This idea! It's so good! Second chapter?
wishwars chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
Oooo I like this!
princess moonie chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Omg, love it! Great story :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Love it! Please continue! No reason to stop at the best part.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
I absolutely LOVE this story so far. Nice suspenseful ending right at the climax. :' (
sailormoonie17 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Yes, please update! I absolutely loved it :) Though my only problem with it, and this is really a personal preference, is the very physical relationship that Enydmion and Serenity have right off the bat. Even though they're soul mates it doesn't seem quite realistic. And I'm just not a huge fan of reading explicit material in general, but that is entirely up to you! I'm really looking forward to an update sometime soon in the future. :)
Tabbykatroses chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Whaaaaaat?! That was cruel. If you don't update soon...I'll ... I'll ... Do something generally unpleasant, but not totally illegal can't tarnish my sparkly, shiny record.
AM9 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Fantastic beginning! I loved the idea of her finding her crystal during her meeting with Endymion. I do hope this will follow a slightly different path than most other SilMil stories. Maybe a different antagonist, or some other new twists? You are such a fantastic writer, and I look forward to whatever you come up with.
UniversalBunny chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
This. Is. Amazing. Please please keep writing!
sailormoon0630 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Awesome first chapter very exicting ending to it, can't wait for the next one:D
MySarcasticGreenCrayon chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
I think this is definitely a story worth pursuing! It is great and I think it's a unique SilMil premise and I'd be very excited to see it keep going. Great writing as always!
Dark Moon Ministry chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Wow, I really liked this! You have captured everything that is Sailor Moon, and even if the plot is (basically) not very original, it still feels surprisingly fresh and fascinating when I read it. If there would ever have been an arc in the real SM universe dedicated to the life in the Silver Millennium, this could very well be one of the main episodes. It felt completely natural how Usagi and Mamoru met, and how their reactions and dialogue played out.

You have to continue with this. The quality is top notch, and the potential is sky high. I'll put this one on my favourite list immediately.
Anon chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
"Not Continue this story?!"
BLASPHEMY!

It's been AGES since this site has had a story of this caliber!

PLEASE CONTINUE IT!
I'm begging you! Please this is a romantic comedy that is amazingly funny as it is sweet! You captured Sere perfectly! Please write the next chapters soon!

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter, at your earliest convenance,
Anon aka Anomyous Angel 0; )

P.S. Thankyou for sharing! ; )
SerentiyMoonGodness chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Great Start!
Luna Goddess of the Night chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Honestly, I think this is worth pursuing. The plot is great. The romance is wonderful, and the writing was flawless. Not a detail I could nitpick at.

Except, I would have drawn out the crystal search a bit longer, given Serenity a fight or flight reaction. And in protecting Endymion, her Crystal would appear. But it was pretty good. I'd like to see where this goes. Update soon.

-Luna
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