Reviews for Déjame Amarte
kasiaeliza chapter 6 . 6/14
Ariella with her language, modern behaviour and little ironic attitude is quite refreshing character, and she could really mess up ... or solve problems with Zorro's death.

I have some thoughts:
- Victoria know Miguel (when he brought Ariella) - where from?
- Ariella has problem and magically she knows everything - archery, nursing, doctoring ... if it repeats in future it sounds little unrealistic and too much heroine, but if she stays at that level of abilities, I think it would be ok.
- Victoria is a little too much panicked in 6th chapter, and I suppose that she shares her room for wounded Zorro and rather bring Ariella to help. Only excuse it could be that Victoria's room is upstairs and Ariella downstairs.

But anyway, this plot is a little mysterious, promising and with a pinch of romance in the air, so I hope You will continue : D
Frapper chapter 6 . 2/4/2015
I like how Ariella seems to be able to handle anything, and I'm really enjoying her character. I also like the possibility of Diego/Zorro having another love interest other than Victoria because I never really like her. And I always love stories when Zorro gets injured.
I like your story and I hope you post again soon, but I have to complain about the severity of Zorro's injury. If doctor Hernández needs someone to help him to treat the wound, and Zorro is drifting in and out of consciousness due to blood loss, it doesn't seem credible IMO than the wound is only a scratch that can be easily treated with pressure and a bandage. Sorry, I was expecting something more dramatic, that would require XXI century medicine/surgery. Otherwise doctor Hernández would have been able to sort it out. And if Zorro had lost so much blood, he won't recover so quickly to talk to her immediately without some king of fluid replacement. It would have been more mesmerizing for everybody (and medically more credible) if Ariella produces a bag of intravenous fluids from the future. Nice. (after all, antiseptic wipes didn't exist in 1820 either) :D
But don't pay too much attention to what I say. If you read any of my stories, you'll see I am a freak obsessed with detailed medical treatments, while everybody else isn't. Nice job, anyway.
Frapper chapter 4 . 2/3/2015
Ah! I knew the language issue could only get better. Shocking it is! Shocking! LOL
Frapper chapter 3 . 2/3/2015
I love the way you can mix modern slang and old fashion language here. Nice.
Frapper chapter 2 . 2/3/2015
Very intrigued about that man now. And about the weird bowl under the bed! LOL. Now that I think about it, where did they empty these things when they were full? The joys of 1820, I suppose.
Victoria looks a bit rough for her usual self, isn't she?
Why are these chapters so short? Oh, I see, so we review more times. Gotcha! ;)
Frapper chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
I like the premise for this story, looks interesting. I also like your writing style, it flows really well. Although I hate reading unfinished stories, I think I may get caught on yours. I'll have to keep reading then :D
Queen Dove chapter 5 . 12/26/2014
Beautiful job please continue this story and please update soon I am really enjoying this story I have watched some of the original series and I really love your idea s so when you have the time please continue
Unknown Miko chapter 5 . 8/13/2014
Please add the next chapters soon. I really want to find out what happens next. Will Ariella find out who Zorro is? Will Diego and Ariella become a couple? Will Ariella stay with Diego or go back home? If she does go home will Diego be reincarnated so that they can be together? If Diego is reincarnated will there be a sequel that crosses your original story over with Zorro Generation Z?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
What if generation z zorro was taken back in time and landed inbertween the original zorro and the capitan when they where fighting in the pubablo.
Mullkkkkkk chapter 5 . 5/4/2014
I like, I like, continue plz
BlackasEbony chapter 5 . 5/3/2014
_ you have been very busy today! excellent chapter! nice flow and characterization :) for our fiery red head :D
DietMJ chapter 5 . 9/22/2013
Hope the move is going well and you are settling in to the new place.
DietMJ chapter 4 . 9/22/2013
Now you really have my curiosity up! A match between Ariella and Diego?
DietMJ chapter 2 . 9/22/2013
Well, I suspected they were going back in time, and I was hoping it was Victoria. Looking forward to see how the story line plays out. You're got my interest.
Debra chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
A new and novel approach to the story. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you.
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