I really like this, it's okay if you never update but if you ever do I'll be really happy, this fic is one of the reasons I got more into KHR.

Tbh, this fanfic is much deeper and meaningful than the anime. In the anime, they shrugged of important details about the character’s past which was made logical here. I really like this fanfic and hope you will continue it. I feel excited af when I thought about how things will turn out in the Varia Arc and Future Arc and if possible, the Inheritance Arc too. It’s interesting how much this Tsuna care for Gokudera, Yamamoto, Lambo etc. This is just so much more deeper. No pressure but I really hope for more chapters and updates. Thank you for making this fanfic by the way. I really appreciate this UwU

Tsuna cuddling with Gokudera? That’s a big YES. We need that scene pLEASE

You killed me with 1827 before the chapter even start. Thanks.

God knows I’m squealing and tossing around in my bed when Gokudera made his pledge. I stan 5927

cant wait for the next chapter

This is amazing! I love how the characters are written - how much more in depth the story goes about their past, their emotions, etc. I can't wait for the next chapter.

hi. I would like to say more but I'm tired. Hope you two are doing alright. And I like this fanfic. It's slow paced and in a way I don't mind it being. Have a good today. And tomorrow. And every day. Just– good time.

Tsuna tsuna just go and buy the stuff you wanted or else you will be late just bc you were staring at Hayato

Tsuna, girls liking girls is not a crime. I approve about your crush on Kyoko

Ok really interesting idea, I wouldn't mind reading more to find out what will happen. That said, the first section and the section when Reborn comes is hard to understand what is goung on. The descriptions in some cases are nice in others can be a bit much and sometimes even distracting from the plot. The in brackets xomment was unnecessary and ruined the mood you spent 4 paragraphs creating. If you desperately feel the need to make such comments in future use a symbol and at the end use the same symbol again and write the comment. That way you avoid disrupting the flow of the story.

Wrute a very short Author's Note (A.N.) at the beginning letting the readers know there is an Author's Note at the end of the chapter. Make sure that you clearly lable your Author's Notes AS Author's Notes because in this chapter although everything was in Bold I was uncertain if it wss just a Flash back or if it was an Author's Note.

You would both benefit greatly from having a spelling and grammar focused Beta. The spelling and grammar mistakes really make this story difficult to read and to enjoy because it stops the flow of the story your weaving as the person has to go back and make sure they read that word right. Its worse with grammar because the word would be spelt correctly but used incorrectly. Get someone who knows what they're doing there.

This was hard for me to get through and to be honest dues to all the spelling and grammar mistakes I skimmed large portions of the story. I won't be continuing to read it.

Strikehedonia is a wonderful story and although there are spelling and grammar errors they are not so many as to be truly jarring. The timeline in that story is good too. Perhaps it shows your progress?

This took a lot of bravery to write and post, so congratulations for that. And Thank you for sharing.

Omg I love this! I can't wait to find out what happens when they find out that Tsuna is a girl! X3 Can't wait to read the next chapter!You write so much o.O how do you do it?!)

Aaaa poor Lambo, he's about to meet Onii-Chan soon and it's going to be amazing. I like this story a lot see ya

This is literally the best Fem Tsuna fic I've ever read. Never have I seen one delve so deeply into the psychevening of not only herself (not filling it with fan girly drooling) but also of the people she interacts with and befriends. Being able to see what they think, feel and why, is very satisfying for me. And you've made her encounters and subsequent befriending of her friends far better than it ever was in canon, that I cringe when I watch or read the real thing. Just amazing, can't wait for an update some day and I don't care how long I have to wait, as long as you go at your own pace and stay happy and healthy. I got so worked up and mad reading about the verbal harassment that fake friend of you two had said. It's unfortunate but sadly there are many people out in the world and Internet like that, who cozy up to you and befriend, only to deceive and hurt you for their own desires. I imagine she saw what an amazing story you and and was filled with envy, thinking she knew better. But honestly a person like that would ruin the story, it's only the story or should be with Eri and Choco holding the reins. So just remember there are many of us rooting for you two, the good outweigh the bad! 3

awe poor Lambo still a cutie pie but troublesome anime character