Your story is amazing! I remember reading your How to train your dragon fanfiction! It was also amazing! Why did you take it down? Are you rewriting it or?

nice story,but why did you delete how to train your dragon: hel rising story. It was awesome.

...I'm gonna Say it again: Janus is my freakin' god!

...I...Fucking...Love...JANUS XD

I GOT THE JOKE! HE'S HILARIOUS!

And the maze is interesting...IT HAS DINOSAURS :D

Hi there!

I just wanted to say that the first chapter of this fic looks really promising, and I think I will continue to read. The premise is eye-catching and the writing is okay, though I'm sure it will get better as I read the rest of the story.

Good job!

By any chance was the beginning of this chapter based off of the Halo Xbox One trailer? That just can't be coincidence how much they resembled eachother. Anyways, do I need to read Native's other stories for the sequel, or is that not necessary?

Persophone is against killing children? Why did She kill So many then?

I realy love Spectra :3

I hate and Pity Persophone now...

This...Has...Been...Without a doubt...ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I EVER READ!

At first I thought I was just reading a another spyro fanfiction but after a while it felt more then that. Words can't describe how amazing this story is. The plot, the humor, the tragedies the characters whether they be good or bad you felt a strong connection too. I'm utterly speechless at how amazing and how connected I felt to this story. By far this has been the best story I have ever read. I hope you make more.

You know, I can honestly say that I'm excited for the sequel. You've made it so there are so many possibilities for the next that I actually can't even guess what the next one is about.

Okay. I kind of did, kind of didn't see that coming. But I thought she was just going to make him immortal! A god?! That seems like a bit much!

Well...one could say is a part of happy ending...everyone reunited...memtem wish fulfilled, and enemies defeated.

but I am concerned for one topic...

Elise...

I feel the older sister of Tula will do something reckless because , she doesn't know the water guardian is alive...and now with persephone finding love she will not bare she have it when she kill her father , I think deep on her she still care for him , I fear the older water dragoness will waste a golden opportunity of peace antagonizing the leader of the forsworm ...:(

Or i could be wrong and she will lost her will and purpose...like a shell of her former self.

And the dark guardians, I feel Rädsla have a hidden agenda for himself...

A dramatic and powerful beginning, setting up the scene enough so to give an understanding as to what is happening, but leaving a lot open for further development and questions.

Still... 'When Malefor when'? That was a little jarring.