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Amen

Good start so far :)

nice lol

I'm loving what I see so far! My only reccomendation is that you clean up your grammar. You have a lot of unncessary apostrophes and the wrong uses of there, their, and they're.

Excellent fic! Oh and for a Character N'tho Vadam a Sangheili who is the descendant of Thel Vadam and is a fleetmaster in the USOA

Great chapter mate, noce to see you uploading again, but...im a little lost. Was there a sugnificant timejump between ch 7 & 8? Because I'm quite confused as to what Rex and Yularen are doing here, and how they got on this Consular-Class.
Keep up the good work in any case. Can't wait to see where this goes.

So an inspiration for a planet that I cant get out of my head would be Ronin, A UNSC Fortress world. My idea was that it's a cold snowy planet with a massive ring system. It is highly defensible due to the fact that the rings are made of large rocks, large enough to mount MAC's and Mass Drivers. Heads up though, if I ever get off my ass and complete my stories, it is likely that I will use this planet :P

ummm...i was re-reading the 1st few chapters...and something caught my eye...you do know that the standard fighter squadron is 12 fighters right?
that is the same in the halo verse and the SW verse

Good chapter.
Keep it up. Laters.

Alright! Great chapter! Or, revamp, I guess it is.

Hey mate, great story but you should bring the cheif in ( if I'm in sane master cheif petty officer, spatan seirra-117)

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