Awwww! This was so precious! I loved it! Made complete sense to me, and I liked the format!

PS I AM still planning on writing your prompt! The holidays have really messed with my sleep schedule, and thus my writing schedule. Hopefully this weekend?

I'm wondering how the fair people managed to not notice two kids on the wheel :p

It's sweet. I do really like Kitty and Artie. I love how protective he is, even with everything going against them. And how she tries to make the best of the situation... I suppose how unreserved she is with him too, knowing the facade she's always got going at school.

Ahhhh they're just gorgeous. Thanks for writing this!

Oooooooh. Yes good I like good yes something yep.

I like narratives! You jump straight into it, which is just brilliant, and I'm there. Everything just... is right. I'm amazed actually - that's a really hard prompt to fill, and you've done amazingly! I want to keep reading more - I need to know what's going on, what happened with Russia, what the transmission is about... Ahhh! :p

This actually reminds me a lot of Mel's writing - have you been reading much of her stuff lately? :p

No, this is great. Write more after 10! :p Seriously. I honestly think this is one of the best drabbles you've written. It flows beautifully, the language itself is just like honey, it's emotive, it's got symbolism, it has it's own rhythm and current - basically, everything I like to see when I read. And your ending is just perfection.

:D

I really really liked this. I loved Dave's storyline, and I am so interested in anything that gives a little extra glimpse into him. Beautiful job!

great story could you put in something where the jocks, warblers & new directions all together and could you put Sam's little brother and sister Stacey and Stevie

This was definitely a departure for you! Interesting choices with Hunter as the commander and Kurt and Mike as cadets. Some of the lingo seemed a bit stilted but the effort is appreciated! :)

Very unique take and I like how Mike and Kurt were involved.

It's a cool perspective you chose here of the fairgrounds. I really liked that. Have you ever gotten stuck on a ride? It felt very lively reading, so that made me curious where the inspiration for this chapter came from.
:) M

Rachel
Mercedes
Sebastian
Also, I like that you were not afraid to kill characters off, at a time when everyone is writing fluff.
Interesting that this prompt meant several people writing about Finn.

This was sooooo sweet! I absolutely loved this idea & the use of these characters. Wildebrams is totally my new favorite thing - I actually thought of using them for this prompt as well, but an idea hasn't grabbed me yet... And for the record? I am anticipating feeling just as wrecked after this week's episode...

PS Candy floss, that must be a regional phrase. Is that the term for cotton candy? Or am I totally off-base?

Very sweet! I really liked this - the way you used the prompt unexpectedly.

Oh wow.

When you write something like this, something thick with emotion - I mean, it's basically tangible here - what you bring out is words with such amazing beauty. Everything just seems to flow right and mesh together and it's just gorgeous.

This was so sad. To think of losing so many young lives however this happens. Come What May is heartbreaking in this context. So happy to be writing with the group again. Hope you're well. :)

I think Rachel talked about Finn.

I think Mercedes talked about Kurt.

And I know it was Sebastian that said the last part.