Great story love it

Man, I want to read more but there isn't more! Not to bad. a little bit of Grammar issues though.

Has this been abandoned?

Your dad should have taken you to the woodshed and busted your ass with a paddle.

I sooo want to read more of this story! Loved it so far! I think Tim should not date Abby though even if she does apologize and mean it.

Another well written scene-setter.

more please

Most excellent!

that is cool. I really like it and want more
Draco122

Good

This is good, please post more soon.

Seeing as how Abby's one of my favorite charries, I'm not sure I like her in this role even though it's canon. I hope she got better over the seasons. That being said, great work on this. I love your stuff. Catch ya on the flip side.

I kind of like Tom and Ziva getting a wake up call without Tony having to get hurt badly. I don't think I've seen a story quite like that. I hope that it continues, but even if it doesn't, I'm glad it was here in the first place.

-Kai

love it. I can't wait to see what happen next.

Great start to your story and I hope that there will be an update soon. It seems that Abby was the only one who was on a power trip and I hope that they can convince Gibbs of this when he returns. It would serve Abby right if Gibbs told her that she was one of the reasons why he felt he had to leave. When Gibbs was hurt and in a coma Franks came and stayed with him, so you have to wonder if the real reason Gibbs went to Mexico was because Abby and Jenny kept pushing Gibbs to return to work and to remember them.