I just re-read Emperor Mage and this was a perfect, steamy, addition! Thanks!

Agh. Beautifully tied into the original storyline. I'm dying from how good this fic is.

After recently re-reading The Immortals as an adult and being left slightly wanting in parts that didn't matter to a 13 year old this fills in some blank spots nicely. It's written really well and you weaved it into the canon story fantastically. I'd love to see you do the same with Realm of the Gods, you would definitely do it justice.

Interesting!

This is beautiful, and I love you.

I stumbled upon a pair of your stories when searching for some Immortals stories, and when I realized just how well written they were I went right to your profile and starting reading the others. I should have reviewed on the first two, because they were equally as well written as this one. But, this one gets the first review because I simply love how well you wove something so seamlessly into the actual book. It was terrific to read, and makes me wish that Tamora Pierce did a series of Immortals from Numair's point of view.

Thanks for the great one-shots!

im really liking how you took a scene in the book and gave us Numair's thoughts
he was so in character and adorable it was frankly ridiculous (in a good way) and endearing
thank you!

great story, enjoyed his POV

This was enjoyable. :)

This was amazing, well thought out and a perfect compliment to the novel!

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE! Anyway, that story was simply excellent 3

i like it i wish it had been a lemon between numiar and daine

Excellent perspective on his confused feelings about Daine. Hope you're doing more stories about Numair and Daine!

very good. this could have turned into a multi-chap fic, telling things from numair's point of view.