Just found this story and WOW Galahan is an incredible character, and the way you inserted him into the story is really well done. I read a lot of books and fanfiction and sort of whack-in-the-head eccentric characters are rare to find - so this was really a treat! If you ever become inspired to continue this story I'll be here waiting for the conclusion. You kind of left us here at the climax you know? Would love to see Galahan get some closure with his totally-not-former-master Astrious, and Henrietta.

Wow i love this OC Please tell me his story. I need to know

Love this story please continue it soon

I quite like the jealousy routine please have the Protagonist flirt with some other girls when Henrietta is there also

Finally! I found myself an oc story rather than an ooc main character. But, dont get me wrong I like those type of stories, but the problem is they are a bit overrated. Anyway great story so far and I like characters who are detectives, they mostly take the stories seriosly with a bit humor. Plus, they have the mindset of a proffessional and an open minded and matured pesonality. The main character as a wizard that is not too weak or too powerful is a major bonus too. Heh heh, sorry if this comment is so long, I kind of always gave of my reactions ,thoughts and comments to stories that suits my taste.

Do i feel some dresden influence over hère ? E-E

So where is the rest? I hate when you stop right in the middle

Cool story bro. Galahad isn't a shallow, overpowered, monster of an oc like most foz fics, and is funny as hell! Please update soon.

you turn this into a perveted harem anima into a save the princces fairy tail and i only have one question? why?

cant wait for you to update soon love love it

Being insane always works

It's been so long I had retread a few chapters. It was very much worth the trouble. Hopefully the next chapter comes more smoothly!

Yayyyy! i can't wait to see the next chapter. great chapter by the way.

Simply can't wait for Tiffa to come in. Hope she and Saito stick to canon as well, and Galahad is awesome as always!

Gonna review here, I don't know if you are still working on this or not, but this is a really entertaining story. Galahad is by far one of my favorite original characters and works so perfectly in this universe. Hope you keep up the good work.