I discovered this story four days ago, and I can't stop reading. I like this story. I'm stunned you can imagine a so long and so different stoy for Deeks. Thank you for writting it.

what an amazing story. i cried so much in this story, i just got lost

Its all Kensi's fault anyways

Im dome kensi is a selfish fucking bitch who only cares about herself if more people die not only is DEEKS gonna be the one to suffer because of it but now he only has her lame ass for so called protection because shes taken him from the team and put others at risk because all she cares about is herself and her own selfish feelings.

Im done with this

If kensi takes deeks im done. This isn't about that bitch

Another fanfic kensi is ruining

I was right kensi is ruining this im out

God i can already see kensi ruining this story she always does

Interesting, long, complex, bittersweet - perfect. Enjoyed reading your story very much.

I liked how Deeks stood up to these two bad guys, that he's beginning to see he's not the weak one.

Good twist of an ending!

I really like that you had Kensi profess her love right away, rather than dragging it out, which would have been the more typical decision.

I absolutely love the way you depicted the team members various reactions to the news. They all seemed very in character and I appreciated how upset and worried they all were. I can only hope that Deeks will be able to let himself be supported by all their love.

Well this sure is one addictive story. I was hoping to enjoy one chapter a day but I'm already through the first five. My heart is breaking for Deeks and I so hope that his team will be able to offer him all the love and support he needs once they find out.

Excellent story. I really liked the ending and how Deeks got a loving family. Thanks for writing!