I do hope you update soon!

Amazing please update. Its sooooooo interesting!

Are you planning to update this again? I'd love to read more!

YAAAAAAY! This story is AWESOME! Please update soon! xD

*hugs Canada* No my poor little baby. It will be okay.
Dear Christ, I did not want to start shipping Canada and Romania. I already started shipping Canada and Prussia on accident.
...I think I've read this before though. Chapter 3 just seemed ridiculously familiar to me and I can't fathom why.
*deep breath* Okay, so it's probably because I read all the chapters all at once and in between I was dealing with little children and dogs but I *frustration* I don't know what to tell you for this story.
I mean...there were a few typos for you to look out for but EVERYONE had typos. They have typos in published books for fuck's sake so that's always the worst thing to point out in a story.
I just don't know what to say. There were times, where it was the perfect opportunity for description. In any creative workshop ever they'll tell you "show don't tell". "Don't tell me Romania's eyes are red, show me how they resemble the darkest color of a summer sunset in the horizon" or some shit like that (oh my God that was a terrible example, don't use that ever I don't know what I'm thinking) and there were plenty of times in this story that I just wanted to take those scenes are rewrite it so that it was showing instead of telling but I don't know how to explain what I want. (Ugh, I'm actually really terrible at giving feedback if you haven't already figured it out) but this story is really good and yet there's still lots of room for improvement but there's lots of room for improvement with everything so I just don't know what to say anymore.
*deep breath* I need to calm down.
Ugh.
*frustration*
I'm sorry, I'm not very helpful actually. It's been a while since my last workshop. I forgot how stressful it was trying to help people. *rambling nonsense*
*quiet voice* Anyways I really enjoyed this story and I want more.

Keep writing!

Aloha Hello Bună ziua (at least I hope it' day time there? ) Either way, I was randomly looking for fanfictions with Romania as they seem to be more rare and stumbled upon your little piece of work! I very much enjoyed it and finished it maybe almost a week before today? The only reason I am barely answering now is because I am indeed so very lazy so you'll have to excuse me for that o;

Alright review time O I really liked the whole family setting for Canada and how everything somewhat revolves around him though people forget him. I get he's depressed and I wouldn't be surprised, it's very hard being lonely, so him cutting works well. By the way *gives a cookie* Good work on putting up a warning, most authors forget about it and it's usually helpful. O I'm not disturbed by the themes, but yeah you get a cookie for thinking about putting up the warning anyway.

I like how you put in Canada's character, he's quite sweet, but knows what to say and has his own comebacks plus his usual maple syrup obsession of course. On the other hand I do believe you should put more work into Romania. Not that I don't like how you play him but when writing I feel as if you have a good grip of Canada and what you wish for him but except for the somewhat cheery attitude and the whole phobia of being rejected cause of what he is, you seem to not have a good grip on Romania as if in your eyes he is in between a plain character and a complex character, something which has yet to take shape. Work hard on it, I'm sure you can manage to give him a good personality and get a grip on things if you try!

I feel kind of bad for what Canada had to go through, but it's necessary for the story and I understand that. I'll admit for some reason I really enjoyed the RusAme parts, they came off pretty good whether you read fanfiction about them before or not (If you found a good one, I'd be grateful if you pointed me in that direction despite the endless list of fanfiction I want to read). Don't feel dirty about the sex parts, if anything they were fairly alright compared to others and none of them were extremely lewd which is good as that might'v been a bit out of character depending on how far you took it. You're better when you concentrate on Canada's emotion and inner turmoil from what I noticed, so when doing lemons try concentrating more on the contradictions he's feeling, on what he wants and what's actually happening, the difference between the two, leave the actions as you have worked with them until now and maybe add some 'convo', though not a lot as that'd probably be a bit out of your style (at least from my point of view, I apologize if I'm wrong). I think you'll have an easier time writing it up when it comes to a love scene rather than a simple sex scene. Good work on giving your readers a lemon despite seeming to feel a bit unsure about it, we appreciate it, plus especially since it's not with the main love interest and Canada will probably want to hide any proof of what happened, it'll only add to the drama!

Now, I'll finish this because I must've bored you already, I tend to write a lot because I want to capture every point I thought about during the fanfiction (I'll admit it might've been a bit better if I had written it right after I read it but oh well). I'd like to say that Google translate screwed you over a bit...or a bit more o; We Romanians only use 'Alo' when answering a phone call (yes, I am from Romania O ), some things were alright but a few others weren't really put or worded properly to mean what you wanted it to. And it's a bit old fashioned to say 'cu bine' when leaving though I admit it's used sometimes and it gives Romania that contemporaneous but somehow classy old feel which I appreciate. From now on, for the sake of your fans/readers and the sake of me not being somewhere between head desking and dying of laughter at google translate, I was thinking of offering to translate if you let me O Just send me whatever conversation or phrase you want translated (if you could also give me some details about the context it would be lovely) and I'll send you a message back with it translated, along with some translation notes here and there if needed (you may include those or not, it's your choice) And as a random such note: 'da' in romanian isn't pronounced how Russia pronounces it in Russian. It is similar, but the 'a' in the word is pronounced as the one in 'father', maybe a little more flat, our accent and the German one seems to be quite similar, but we don't have things like reading our 'w' as 'v' (I thought it was necessary to mention just so you didn't get some random idea to write Romania's convo like that, I appreciate you not using things like 'da', 'aru' and so on and so forth but still using words from the other languages. Gives the characters more individuality). Oh and I talked to a few friends of mine (Sorry, this is random) and they were impressed because of the way I roll my 'r's. Not sure about other languages but in Romanias it's necessary to be able to do that if you want to speak properly and not pronounce 'r' as 'l' which seems a bit like a major flaw to us and how babies usually talk. We even have a small poem for children so they can learn to roll their 'r's XD , it sounds like a bit of a growl when you just roll your 'r' though, but that may be only my impression? Either way, I am done with the review now, sorry for taking up your time! Can't wait to see the next chapter, work hard W

I'm glad Canada got some, but I hope now he doesn't feel guilty about doing it with Bulgaria. Also, did Bulgaria notice his cuts when they were together or were they too drunk?

And yay in the beginning for Romania standing up for Canada!

Waaaaaah! Dx Poor Mattie! Gettin used by the mean Bulgaria 3 not cool! But then again that's what they get for getting drunk off their rockers and mattie bein the sweet piece of ass that he is 3
Great work btw I think this is a very unique storyline and your writing style is awesome :) keep up the good work!

please update it!

Truth: make him tell the truth about how he's still alive. Dare: make dress up in another countries clothes except for the person who dared him (Romano because that's typical, Veneziano and Canada because their to nice for that.) and bitch about how unawesome he is, also complain and whine about the negativities he has. (I love Prussia I just think it would be hilarious to see.)

love ur stories!

. . . I love you, I love this chapter, I love this story, I friggen love crack pairings.

Ooh, what if France has to not sexually touch anyone for a full hour? Like, he seems really touchy, moreso in this fic. . .

. . . Russia should have to kiss Belarus on both cheeks (The Spanish Way!).

Bulgaria should have to give up his yogurt (which I've heard he really likes) for the whole day (or week. . .)

Canada should have to wear a Lolita outfit.

And that is my opinion.

Rae (my girlfriend): *Holding her hand over her bleeding nose*
Me: WAH! MY EYES! SOMEONE GOUGE 'EM OUT!
Yes, me and my girlfriend have very different views. She tied me into a chair and forced me to watch Yaoi videos and doujins. That, my friend... was how I cas introduced to the most evil thing in the universe... YAOI.
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Ciao!

Aww little canada gotta keep you away from pervy countries, get Scotland to bwat them up xD

Aww all those sore bits be ouchie, hope Romania see's them soon so can help Canada get through and start forming new memories to push out the bad.

please update soon!