Wait a minute, off spring of Asari are always asari...

I just came across your story of Cali and found it a neat, fresh spin on all the characters. I can see it's been a long time since your last update, but I hope that you continue with her story! Taken by Cerberus...the chase by Shepard and Vasir that have yet happened. This story definitely deserves to be finished. It's pretty amazing, as is Cali. :)

This story is great but the whole half a chapter of people’s comments is kinda getting old

So Cali got kidnapped by Cerberus, who is led by an indoctrinated man, and the Reapers wanted Shepard dead so that means in this universe they want Cali dead. Things looking grim for her.
On the other hand, if Jack Harper isn't indoctrinated yet then he would do everything in his power to learn about the things Cali hides, to know the future, and from there he would... I don't know. He would definitely go get the Reaper corpse Batarians have hidden away, use the protean VI the Asari hide in their homeworld to his advantage, take Javik, and more...

I have a feeling they will just screw things up though. Hell, maybe Jack Harper will be one of those that go to the Andromeda Galaxy, or send Cali there after draining her brain of all that he could get, but that would only happen if he hadn't gone completely insane.

Really enjoying this story. I hope youll update it

Lol, did the Thorian just propose to Calista? XD

This fic is amazing... I hope you will decide to cotinue it :D

I can't help but feel you abandoned this. Quite saddening considering it's pretty good.

I'm loving this fic. :)

Commander Shepard.

An Angel.

Interesting perspective, but blood transfusions don't change your genetic structure and Cali's modifications are OP to the point of essentially being magic. Literally magic in the case of amp-less biotics.

I really, really love this story. It's a completely new take and your writing is quite captivating. I see it has been some time since you updated this story but I hope you haven't given up on it and will continue it somewhen.

You know I've seen this fic before.. and I didn't read it because I wanted the OC to be asari.. but now I'm interested.

I can't wait for Cali to go off when she learns of the Council basically using her as a lab rat.

hey there. Just wanted to say that this is an amazing fanfic, and that I hope you will continue to update it eventually.

I love this story, I can't wait to see more.