i'm very sad you never finished this story. I liked it very much.

This is really good.

It's tony

Hey,
It's me. I ran out of DOCX files to edit so I showed up here looking for more. Pretty please send as much as you can ASAP )

Also, when you re-post online here as a story after we edit, you need to go back through and change anything edited to italics/bold (like the movie lines in this chapter) and also start using the separation bar. It's in the editing tools of the posting page where you can edit. The one that's a straight bar. If you don't use it everything in Chapter 3 is going to make no sense )

AWESOME! i love where this new story line is going and how you've added in like memories and stuff :) also love the pickup lines at the end

I really don't have anything to review about because i already gave you my opinion in person so yeaaaaaaaaaa... OMG YOU SHOULD PUT A FERRET SOMEWHERE IN THE STORY RANDOMLY i would totally laugh my ass off if you do... yeaaaaaaaaa... and kat should have a girls day out I feel she needs one *wink* *wink*
*cough* add lily * cough* wow I should really go to the doctor to get this checked out... do you think this review is long enough? ...yea I'm done :P

Poor Unfortunate ... OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
;P

Not bad peasant
Gilgamesh

I love this story! The emotional interplay between Loki and Katrina is awesome. I do think someone should let slip to Thor that he has spent some time as dog... Also, Loki after drinking an espresso would be funny.

I really like your story

OMG

CLIFF-HANGER...you are leaving me hanging by a threat!

PLEASE finish!

AWESOME STORY I LOVED READING THE ENTIRE THING!

Does Loki know that she sees his memories?
Good day, good night, and good luck, Loki.

Just and FYI, the epilogue is supposed to be at the end of the story, unless you wanted it to be like that

omg please continue this dont wait please this story is really good omg i love it

YAHOO! THE KISSSS THE EVER ANTICIPATED KISS!