| Reviews for After the Great Battle |
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  ILOVEBRACKENFUR chapter 14 . 4/20/2015 You had a great story, up until the part where you KILLED BRACKENFUR. YOU SUCK, I HAD YOU I HOPE TIGERSTAR COMES AND MURDERS YOU IN YOUR SLEEP. AND IF HE DOESN'T YOU'LL BE HETING A VISIT FROM THE ALL GREAT AND POWERFUL FERNSHADOW! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2014 Why does Lionblaze have two mates? And why does jayfeather have a mate? |
 Ara The Cat chapter 13 . 7/26/2014 Hey! This was a good story, but it was confusing and a bit rushed. There was a lack of detail, but the plot/idea was amazing! Also, I saw alot of grammar mistakes, so just for future stories, make sure you grammar check them carefully, because small mistakes can sneak by you. |
| lupin-lupout chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 Um... Happykit died. |
| HakaishinChampa chapter 3 . 7/14/2014 They don't know anything about Dragons :0 |
| Fading Shadows chapter 7 . 10/23/2013 Oh, um, this is aWESome! It could truly be a masterpiece with time. One thing, though... Cats don't cry. The Erin Hunters made mistakes by making them cry, but they don't Just to let you know. But, I guess, since Warriors is a fantasy, I GUESSS you can have them cry,.. Other than that, t's aweoms.e. |
| Nyancatgrl2013 chapter 19 . 9/15/2013 ok this sucked |
| california poppyseed chapter 3 . 9/13/2013 Okay, I'm on mobile, so I can't type well. But, your story needs a lot of work, and I can recommend some betas. Anywho, feel free to contact me later o we can have a decent conversation without stupid AutoCorrect. Giang Tien of WillowClan |
| california poppyseed chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 Um, this has no story content. It may be reported. |
| Sorrelheart chapter 19 . 9/7/2013 ok i got this lionkit,autumkit,cinderheart, and lionblaze |
| Ff1892 chapter 19 . 9/7/2013 A: her mother is Cinderheart and her father is lionblaze. Umm not sure about the siblings yet. Prize: maybe hollykit and Lionkit (those were two of the past names of her kits) Omg I can't belive that there are twelve kits in the nursurey it is weird I like the story. I've read it since like chap. 5 it's still good |
| sarah chapter 16 . 8/19/2013 Foxleap |
| hissyfitkitty369 chapter 18 . 8/18/2013 I AM A TOTAL JAYXBRIAR NERD. MAKE ONE ABOUT THEM PLZ¡! OR I DIE |
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/18/2013 Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa |
| Believe chapter 8 . 8/18/2013 How about every time someone speaks skip I line, please? I get lost easily in a book O.O |
