I LOVE IT! I had tears omg. That's good.

nice, the knight reactions were great, I liked Gwaine's the best ;)

In my mind, I can see just how the knight probably would have reacted upon finding about the magic. I can also imagine the guilt Merlin carries around with him. I want to thank you for putting these images into words for me. This was really sweet and great to read.

awww that is so freaking sweet.

Nothing was ooc! At least for me. And your writing is /quite/ good. I love your imagery :)

Oh and I love all the Knights reactions. Especially Percival and Lancelot's. And Athur's, of course ;)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I JUST WANT TO COO AT THIS FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER AND THIS IS JUST SO DARN ADORABLE AND AMAZING AND IN CHARACTER AND LOVELY AND SPECTACULAR AND DID I MENTION AMAZING?

Poor Merlin. but I this it's docent but cool.

Thank you for writing and posting.

Oh my goodness. This may just be one of the most perfect Merlin fanfictions I have ever read. I love the details, and even though it wasn't canon, I could see it happening on the show (if the show was a bit darker I guess). I don't think anyone was very OOC, it all seemed to flow. Very well written. Thank you.

Lovely!

This is such a wonderfully written story. It is so powerful and all round amazing - honestly I don't why it doesn't have more favourites...It's brilliant!

This was great, I really enjoyed it :) It's exactly the kind of reveal of Merlin's magic that I would have envisioned myself, just much better written. It was a joy to read and it's a shame it wasn't any longer.

This is great! :)

Great! I loved it! Totally moving, and I'm really glad you included the knight's POVs as well, so we got to understand their thinking. Really well done!

did you know in the original tales about sir percival he grew up with his mother always telling him he was a girl because she didn't want him to go to war XD