What an amazing story it felt so realistic in most taang stories Toph falls in love so easily but in this story there’s real character progression once again amazing fanfic.

Really good story

You said you had another Taang storyWhen in Rome', but I can't find it. Was it remove, or...?

I really liked this- it was just fluffy and fun almost whole time.

It almost got a little crack-y at points (Zuko, Sokka's addition to the party), but that's fine. It didn't seem to be a super serious fic from the beginning so a bit of whacky humor is fine.

Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.

This was so amazing i wished you continued this or showed us thier wedding this is one of my favourite avatar fanfics the characters development seemed so natural and not forced i wish this was longer atleast 20 more chapters showing us thier life from when they first got married and the rest of thier children the one thing that I didn’t like was how zuko chased aang around i think it went on for too long at first it was funny but then turned annoying anway this fanfic was amazing

liked the story great work and a great finished i just hope their are some animations for an alternate ending like this.. i guess i have my imagination for that.. anyway great work

You're absolutely amazing, honestly! You're AMAAAAAZING

Woo hoo! I love taang ships SO MUCH MY FAV.
You should make another story (toph x aang duh)
So goooooood
No lemon though...

AMAZING STORY

Lol

I. LOVE. THIS. STORY! :3

Let me just write a short story in response to chapter two lol
32 years after the events of chapter two a man is telling a story to his young grandkids...
"And there I was, looking at one of the most beautiful women I've ever seen...(hurrying to add in) until I met you of course dear! Anyway...and after a few moments the avatar himself looked right at me...he stared at me with a look that could kill for the longest time...this was a man who had the power to destroy the world if he felt like it...and here I went and pissed him off...he came right up to me! He leaned in and with fire in his eyes made a slicing motion slowly across his neck...I Was scared I thought I would never live to see another day; he told me if we ever met again he would take away my earth bending...FOR GOOD.. To this day I still make days travel to avoid anyone or anything that has absolutely ANYTHING to do with republic city, the air temples, fire lord Zuko, Chief-General Bei Fong, Chief Sokka of the water tribe and his sister the mighty Katara...and ESSPECIALLY the avatar himself! In fact I know for a txt that if you kids were caught doing something by th avatar he would take your bending! So be good kids!"
*laughst heartily while the grandkids stare in horror at the prospect of losing their bending if they did anything bad

Hey there!

First off, I absolutely love what you did with the whole theme. Not many people ( myself included) can pull it off as well as you did and I really like that you managed to keep Aang and Toph in character as much as possible.

Secondly, are you a Zutara fan?

Thirdly, I am guilty of using those kiss quotes ( that's what I call them ) you have at the beginning of each chapter to construct a poem that has one of my favorite quotes and if you'd like to read it, PM me my account name is Purple Butterfly46 ( I'm using Fanfiction reader to review this so I'm not sure if you'd know who reviewed this)

Lastly, I am aware that you are done with this fic and all, but is a sequel possible?

Looking forward to reading more Taanginess from you ( you have a talent for portraying them really, really well)

Your fellow taang fan,
Butterfly

*cries* THIS STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL!

I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING IN THIS CHAPTER! I'VE BEEN READING THIS SINCE THIS MORNING AND I CAN'T PUT THIS STORY DOWN! I LOVE YOUR STORY-TELLING VERY MUCH! YOU'RE A VERY TALENTED WRITER!

This was the most mushy, girly, sickly sweet history I've ever read; and I LOVED every second of it!

They were just do damn cute 33. I couldn't stop giggling and sighting the whole time, *looking defeated* I guess that makes me a soft girl who wants protection instead of the all powerful Great Matter Earthbender. (; _ ;)

I WANT AN AANG! *crying* Why do all boys have to be jerks? I want somebody who whispers to me the meaning of flowers and kisses too... My inner mushy girl (not that I'll ever let her really appear) wants a romantic sweet boy.

Well, leaving behind my obvious emotionals problems, this was a fantastic story that had all the cuteness I needed. I feel I bit sorry for Aang, he didn't get his four children and the one he got didn't even want to spend time with him. (-_-)