| Reviews for The Return |
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guest chapter 5 . 5/3 I say nice of you to do that I would vote for this story just to add more crossover story to grim tales. |
Jebest4781 chapter 4 . 4/29 this was pretty well and good luck on what's to come |
Jebest4781 chapter 3 . 4/29 wonder what you plan on doing next here |
Jebest4781 chapter 2 . 4/29 this was quite decent |
Jebest4781 chapter 1 . 4/29 pretty decent start here and wonder how things will play out |
Jacob Phantom chapter 5 . 5/1/2019 Please update your story soon! |
jcotton42 chapter 4 . 2/6/2016 Yay you updated! Please continue this, it's amazing |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/4/2015 Please update this story, its filled me with so many what if scenarios, i wanna know what would happen next |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2013 Boy Scout in highschool is awesome! I'm a Girl Scout in high school myself. |
nightmaster000 chapter 3 . 5/11/2013 Great chapter. If your going to pair Mimi with Danny any chance of adding Aku's daughter Chi to the mix, and making this story a Danny/Mimi/Chi pairing? |
RCRC36 chapter 3 . 4/16/2013 Please make more its sowe gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooood |
coldblue chapter 3 . 4/14/2013 Interesting! I hope Minnie and Grim Jr. somehow keep there Nergal Powers. Danny going to be a UNIQUE and POWERFUL creature in the Underworld. Danny has Pure Exctoplasm, Blood of two 7th level Demons and Reaper powers I hope Danny gets a Kick Ass Scythe that is Mix of Ghost/Demon/Nergel Powers. I don't know how Danny willl look after this but he will be Bad Ass. Maybe a different Skin tone, Eye color and Teeth. There should be a differen color Aura around him as well. Maybe a Black or Dark Purple color Please have some romance between Danny and Mimi/Her happen soon. I have not see Danny and Mimi bond with each other and get romantic yet. I don't care if the romance is Slow or Fast, just as long as you hint at it. PLEASE! Have Danny kick HIM ass for Tricking him and killing his Family? Questions What will Nergel and Danny meeting will be like? Will Clockwork make appearance again answer why Danny is in this Time Line? Keep up the good work. |
Stelarwand030 chapter 3 . 4/13/2013 Very good so far but i had some trouble understanding the last two sentences in the first part of the ritual and where you were going with it. Other than that tiny issue can't wait for more. |
jeanette9a chapter 3 . 4/13/2013 oh danny... |
RCRC36 chapter 2 . 3/31/2013 PLEAS MAKE MORE ITS SOW GOOOOOOD |