I loved it! but some of the content made me cringe. Like, what the fuck was the whole thing with the tray?! I thought there were gonna be handcuffs or something on there. But either way, this was pretty good! Now, I've read a lot of fanfics that have depressing endings and make me wanna punch the screen, so whatever you do for the ending, DON'T MAKE IT DEPRESSING OR SAD OR I WILL COME FOR YOU!

jk

but seriously though, DON'T!

You did such a lovely job. I can't wait for more.

Oh, oh, I- I'm cumming and oh, OH!

I thought something was off when you suddenly switched to italics. To think it was a dream... Poor Sophie. You have an awesome writing style. :)

Awww! I absolutely adored this. Pretty much everything about this was sexy as hell, and I really love how you write the relationship between Howl and Sophie (well, not the dream one, haha), but I really like everything about this. The characters were definitely in character, and their relationship was so sweet. Exactly what I would expect from a playful sweetheart like Howl! Seriously though, this had my heart all twitterpated, lol. Had me awing like a freaking dork. Two thumbs waaaay up! lol

Awww! I absolutely adored this. Pretty much everything about this was sexy as hell, and I really love how you write the relationship between Howl and Sophie (well, not the dream one, haha), but I really like everything about this. The characters were definitely in character, and their relationship was so sweet. Exactly what I would expect from a playful sweetheart like Howl! Seriously though, this had my heart all twitterpated, lol. Had me awing like a freaking dork. Two thumbs waaaay up! lol

I can understand how people would see this as 'rape-y', but it's really not. Sophie is only resisting a bit not because she doesn't want it, but because she finds the feelings unfamiliar and weird. I'm really liking this and you're an amazing writer :)

Only passing by to remember you that you should update to keep us alive hhaahaha

That was very nice. It's not often that people will expand out love scenes (and I will admit myself at lacking in this field, but to grant myself some credit, my stories are all from high school to first year of college, and I am now studying for my MA in literature, so there has been a bit of a time lapse for my writing) and it is refreshing to see when people do take their time and give the proper amount of detail a scene may require. I thought your flow was very well written and enjoyed the story immensely for the scene it is intended to be. You did have me worried when I read first the disclaimer of pseudo rape and then the dream scene because it made me question your morals regarding rape, but when it became obvious that that was a dream and not the actual actions my worries almost instantly vanished. It was a great transition and well used tactic to "hook" your reader. Kudos to you, and I look forward to seeing the ending of this story. This will probably be the first one that I have watched in five years, if that tells you anything. :) Keep writing!

*cough* That was hmmm... Well... You're good, really good at it!

Omgggggggggg! Where have you been hiding? This fic is awesome! I didn't agree with the 'rape' comments at all, by the way. Can't wait for the next chapter

Its OK. You must have been busy. It was an good read.

GUYS. I do not have all the time in the damn world, you have to give people time to edit crap like this. Quit bickering over the fact that you don't know what the hell kinks are. Psuedorape is a thing, that's what I added to this. If you don't like it, LEAVE. Don't leave your annoying bitching here. Geez.

not rapey, just rushed. the characters make sense if going with the studio chibli versions, but lots of typos and incoherent sentences make it a difficult read. Could be a great fic after some more editing.

I know it's a little late to review but.. 'Ugh' Can you please shut the fuck up? What you reviewed was Bull Shit. The Author was really good in this fanfic, and you or I couldn't do better. And hello..? It's called Fanfiction for a reason... dumb ass. Everything doesn't have to be accurate so please fucking get lost, because your NOT impressing anyone. Author your amazing, I love this story, it was completely amazing, and lets face it guys.. she wasn't 'raped' because wouldn't she just be crying and shouting for help? all she said was 'no' If her body doesn't try to get out of the situation properly, it isn't counted as rape. Thank you.