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Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 12/24/2019 Well, it's mighty good that these Guardians have all the time in the world, then, because Jack deserves all those 'next time's, and more! What a sweet, lovely one shot! Fantastic job as always! |
John Smith chapter 1 . 5/12/2013 Perfect! I love how you balanced Jack out in a way that I personally like to see him as well. He's not the character we see on the outside—or at least, not ONLY that character. He is so much more on the inside. The way you wrote his voice came across perfectly. Of course he would pick up on subtleties that the others may or may not even realize they are giving off. Jack is not like the others in that his needs and wants are incredibly fine-tuned on attention, acceptance, and feeling as though he matters. You depicted this profound and difficult-to-portray concept beautifully. Very nice job. :) |
Mossycradle chapter 1 . 4/1/2013 Beautiful This is really sweet. I love your little stories they are always so in character. I'd love to read more! Keep it up! |
RockMafia93 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 Aww, I loved this! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Great job. Favorited! |
Magiccatprincess chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 So sweet! |
Kaitie85386 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 Cute. You captured the characters really well! :) great job -kaitie |