Thanks, great story

Great story :)

Like it so far :)

O.M.G AMAZING, CAN NOT EXPLAIN MY FEELS, DAMN

WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?

HAVE YOU WATCHED THE SEASON 5 PREMEIRE!? IT WAS AMAZING! SO MANY CS FEELS!
Emma (As Dark One): "The dark one has destroyed everyone near it. Look at Gold. I can't do that to my family... to YOU. She has to die..."
Killian: "Listen to your words. It's not you speaking, Emma! We'll find another way, together! Look at us, heroes and villains together for you, BECAUSE of you. And if we can overcome it, if we can overcome our demons... then so can you!"

This was good. The characters were good. True love's kiss was unique. I thought Hook going to Rumple at the end made sense. What else was left for him but revenge? And he knew he couldn't defeat the Dark One. I liked Neal who simply wanted Emma back. Henry understood his mom better than she was willing to understand herself. And I liked the author's notes. Your enthusiasm for new scenes was catching!

I agree with the Alexa girl, whoever she is. If you listen to "Everybody Loves Me" during their sex scenes, it really adds a whole other dimension.

I have no words... but, I will say, if you read this chapter while listening the OneRepublic's song "Everybody loves me" It's quite a treat. :D

Okay, first off, THAT STORY WAS ABSOLUTLEY AMAZING! But... I would of loved it even more if you would have included the wedding part in it. I am ABSOLUTLEY in love with Captian~Swan, and now that in OUAT Season 5, Emma is the new dark one, will Hook (Killian) save Emma... or join her? Oh, and BTW, the story was stupid in many ways because in the real show, you know that they've never had sex, gotten married, and Neal DIED, (Thank god!) so you should make another story that shows what happens IN the show that's actually believable. You want to make fans actually think that it will happen in the next episode, so they'll keep reading. Anyway, TO ALL OF THOSE STUPID PEOPLE WHO THINK EMMA AND REGINA (Swan~Queen) ARE MEANT FOR EACHOTHER, YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED!

Amazing story! Really great writing

I just checked the date on your story...I figured(earlier) that it was written before season 3 as you had Neal as Pan. (I think it was this story) so anyway, you must be ecstatic how season 3 went. I know I am. I feel sorry for Regina. I'm guessing Emma's guilt about bringing Marion (sp?) back will interfere with her relationship with Killian. But at least they have a chance of developing their relationship now. Regina might take revenge and tear them apart. I mean Snow accidentally/inadvertently caused her to lose Daniel and now Emma, Snows daughter is causing her to lose Robin! "The course of true love never did run smooth". Before the show/the series is over I pray. Emma and Killian are together. If not we need to get the torches and pitchforks to go after the writers!
They start filming season 4 July 9th I read...the writers have already been at work for weeks!
I hope you write more CS stories!
Meanwhile in my fav fandom, Damon sacrificed himself to save everyone in Mystic Falls and to get his brother back from the 'Other Side'. He's 'dead'. "Bring Damon back" trended on twitter for 25 hours (or more) some people tweeted president obama to do something (hopefully those were very young fans)
Elena is devastated...beyond devastated. Being a supernatural and magic centered show we figure they're going to find a way to bring Damon and Bonnie back! On TVD, everybody's been dead at least once if not more times...watching the five seasons of TVD you need a box of Kleenex with you for almost every episode...this series just keeps ripping your heart out!
So my two MOST favorite anti heroes are Damon and Hook/Killian. I also love Daryl (twd) Tyrion (got) Elijah (to) Leonardo (dd) Raylan (justified) Lucas(banshee)...etc...
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with all of us! :) and putting up with my wandering comments :p. :)

Totally love the thief and pirate thing! Awesome! You RAWK girl! :). 2 thumbs up! Way up!

I'm pretty sure she's not dead because there are two more chapters plus you promised us a HEA, :)

Wondering...do other reviewers tell you glimpses of their life's story? Maybe that was TMI in my last review. Sorry if I overstepped or annoyed you :/

This twist (in this ch) is excellent. When you really really love someone you WOULD take a bullet for them! LOver, family, friend whatever...it's a human thing to love that much...

This was why Elena kept choosing Stefan! He was 'vanilla' the 'safe' choice...Damon made her feel too much (he consumes me) and it scared her (until it didn't).
I walked away from the love of my life for a completely different reason...srsly...our political views were diametrically opposed...I could never get enough of him (and evidently vice versa) we were together off and on for over five years but the fights were almost always about politics! I just figured out I couldn't live with someone who believed so radically different no matter how much I loved him...it would never work out in the long run...we did manage to remain friends after a time...and remain so to this day...we justdont ever talk politics! Lol