Love this story and always come back for a reread with the hope that maybe, just maybe one day you will continue it.

Eh, still would've shot her. Because holding yo some ridiculous, absolute view of good and evil is enough to warrant her death in my eyes.

Eh, realistically it seems like she'd get killed against any larger force if she attacks head on like i half expect you to have her do. We'll see, i'm kinda just biased against her at this point

Oh ho ho, look who thought he should've killed williams. Preferably on Mars. This motherfucker

I like it.

Looked up crucible. Dunno what the craziness is, but im sad you're not rewriting the me3 storyline. I hope your life is less hectic now (years too late haha)

Eh, i wish he'd just shoot her.

I feel like it's wrong that i hate ashley already, despite knowing nothing of me beyond the general plot. Oh well

I like it so far. I hope shepard reminds me of your jason from fallout. Seems to so far.

Ohh the angst, I can feel it. Despar, all ye that stand before the Reapers. Hahahaha

I don't know much about mass effect but i think i'll enjoy this

Nice chapter

Good luck Normandy

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Good luck Shepard and the Normandy