Loved it!

Gosh this story is beautifuuuulllllll I just love the way you used em words to describe everything so perfect and accurately. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us!

Loveee it!

Good

Awww! Loved it! Good job! In future reference, you might want to work on some of your tenses/word usages in conversation. I'm not sure if it's just how the characters talk, but I noticed it a few times throughout the story. Things like saying 'them' instead of 'those' or things like that... Also, things like 'I've to,' or 'we've to,' are quite old fashioned terms, and I'm not sure the characters would speak like that. Loved the story, good job.

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I knew they were tricking them! And, as a huge glee fan (if you couldn't tell), I love that you used the insult 'hobbit', just made me crack up a bit. Loved the chapter!

no! But YeS!

NO! LET BECA GO FIRST!

Awwwwww. Loved it. Sad to know about Chlo though.

So, he's suspicious... I bet Beca will end up spilling it all to him... Or at least I hope. Poor Cho at the end though... They're both just real confused.

... What is his DEAL...?! It's probably just the overprotective big brother act... Right...?

... I wonder what's up with Adam... I'm loving this story so far! I haven't read many pitch perfect fanfictions so this is a good start to the fandom!

I absolutely adore this story! Even though it's been so long, it's just SO good! You know a story is amazing when if can cause your heart physical pain and joy. Thank you for writing this, it was awesome!

Started off super strong, amazing, well-developed with deep characters and an interesting family secret to reveal, but it fizzled...and fast. I can tell you have an amazing writing style and are very talented, but it felt extremely rushed by Chapter 16. Happens to the best of us though, especially with multi-chapter fics with readers to impress. Such potential here, but the dad storyline was problematic and just so we are all clear, hitting your daughter in a drunken rage is actually illegal...which is why it is confusing when you said it was "nothing illegal." Anyways, Bechloe is awesome. I still love them...even though this story made me question Chloe by the end. Beca was once again the punching bag by the end of a fic but at least they got married and stayed together!