Man, I just love the way you broke down Bakura's character - not just analytically, but a literal, almost methodical mental breakdown. Honestly, I'm left feeling so uncomfortable and chilled - both in good way! Especially with that end - 'again'. Fantastic.

This was so raw and really well-written! It's not often i want to hug yami bakura, but I can't help but feel bad for him in this XD; poor thief king. the loss of identity is so scary! and the last lines... :(

I like the idea of other hosts, too XD Maybe after this the Spirit left the poor guy alone.

WAAAAAAAAHH! I LOVESTHIS!THIS IS SO SAD AND LOVELY IN MY EYES!

You write so well. I really liked how you interwove different emotions through the story.