Very very very very very very very very very very hoooooooooooooootttttttty

I'm writing four at a time, two is not that ambitious. Sorry if that sounds rude I don't mean it to be.

THIS WAS SO LOVELY AND CUTE I LOVED IT !

This is now my favorite fic. It had me on a rollercoaster and I loved every minute of it. So beautifully done!

Really a great story And well written would love a sequel (ﾟεﾟ) thanks for writing this I enjoyed reading it alot!

This is my first time reading this couple and I'm so glad I stumbled on this story.

My top fav. So well writen was it that it had me at the edge of my seat, dying to know what would happen next.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.

Stupid Gary.

one word. Cute.

I guess make-up sex has to be really good if its the plot in a lot of yaoi stories. lol

you made me cry omg poor ashy bby he deserves the world

love your workkkk

I kind of thought it would have that melodramatic ending of Ash about to go to the plane and Gary chasing after him and apologizing then the Oak family and Delia knowing the stuff between them but hey, that ending works too xD I love the narration. Kudos!

Wow I just love this story so much, and it's .written,did you like create these characters or something because the way you write them is so amazing!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! They can't be sad, it just isn't right!
Now they're off to Unova and their happily ever after . . . ! Don't judge me for loving a nice, warm happy ending. XD
The lemons were superb (WAY better than what I can write XD) and it all fell together so naturally. You paint a wonderful, detailed picture and it was super easy to imagine. Love the characterization, and the heart-break? It made me hurt inside . . .
Great job! You're succeeding in converting me to Palletshipping! XD
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Waaahhh! Gary whyyyyy? T_T
This was so CUTE and then . . . they'd better get back together or I'm gonna . . . !

Gosh I don't even really ship this but this was waaaaay too good. All of my love. 3