| Reviews for First Steps |
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  baby jen chapter 1 . 12/21/2001 wow-you captured it brilliantly! |
 Delete this account plx chapter 1 . 4/16/2001 Nice. |
| Rachel chapter 1 . 1/21/2001 that was great! very atmospheric - i was right there with him. |
| Susan chapter 1 . 10/14/2000 Excellent emotions! I've been where Carter was. You got it just right! |
| Becky chapter 1 . 10/13/2000 That was good, short, but deep. (Can I just say, I LOVED "Homecoming"!) Also, don't put yourself down in the begining of the story, it's up to the readers to decide if it's good. :) |
| Anne Fuller chapter 1 . 10/13/2000 Really Good caught the moment just right |
| jen chapter 1 . 10/13/2000 come on-lets have another! |
