Agent of Teal,
I've really enjoyed reading your story. Whenever I reach chapter 33, I always go back to the beginning and read the whole story again. I have been doing this for the past six years. I wish you would continue adding the next chapter. I understand that you must be busy or have a family to take care of now, and I really appreciate you making this story. It has given me so much more insight than reading the Archie Comics. As much as I love them, I would love it even more if you found the time to continue the story. I am not trying to pressure you, I am merely trying to share my excitement with you. Again, thank you so much for giving me a story I read every day, 24/7.

(P.S.: You have given me such a better impression of Charles than the Archie Comics did. I never thought of either of the siblings having a middle name, and I always came up with the idea that when Sonic grew up (again, in the Archie comics), he would make fun of his uncle for not having a middle name, and so call him "Charles Nothing Hedgehog" as my family tended to call me for not having a middle name. Just thought I would share a bit of my view with you)
Thank you for every chapter you have put the hard work into. You have given me some of the best six years of my life, and I appreciate it all.

Nice idea to add Lionel. :) I actually kinda like Cyrus.

I have just finished this and I can't wait for the next chapter! I love how you have developed the characters more and tweaked the various ideas to make it your own! I'm interested to see where you take the whole twin thing and I sure hope Jules doesn't get mortally wounded again although I know he probably will and oh! I look forward to finding out :)

I'm glad you updated the story. It would be a shame if you didn't continue. I can't wait for the next chapter!

You came back!
I thought you were dead.

Wow. This fic has been an old favorite for quite some time now. I honestly can't believe I found it again; I phased out of the FFN archives a good few chapters ago. And you know what? It still holds up. I basically binged the last eight-ish chapters because I just had to see what happened next. Normally, I'd go point-by-point in a review, but since it's hard to do that over eight-ish chapters, I'll be general.

I love the concepts. Story concept, Jules and Charles' history and relationship, Aleena/Bernadette mashup, everything. I once tried to explain the Archie Sonic backstory to my friend, whose mind subsequently melted. It's some complicated stuff, but by George, you've managed to take it, mix it with the still-more-mysterious stories from other continuities, and still make it both sensible and incredibly compelling.

Jules, in particular, really foreshadows his son; his interactions with everyone are masterfully done and wonderful to read. Not that anyone else's are bad; it's just that whether Jules is talking to Alicia, the king, Charles, Aleena-anyone, really-I just fall more in love with him (in the best way possible). He has Sonic's tendency to get along with everyone and make everyone's day, and it's so great to read.

You've always got another surprise up your sleeve, too. The author's note at the end of this last chapter-which I thought was cut-and-dry, Sonic's on the way, everybody celebrate-about Jules and Aleena having another kid after these twins raises all kinds of questions. Is Jules still going to be turned Robian? Will Sonic remember him if he does? Is one of the babies actually Sonic, or is he the single who's yet to come? (Not that I particularly like that last question; I need baby Sonic NOW XD) You've done this all throughout the story, and it so perfectly accentuates the uncertainty of the times and the stage of life Jules and Charles are in.

One final note: Your take on writing toddlers and small kids is literally the cutest thing. That scene a couple of chapters back with toddler Knuckles was almost too much for my heart; he was SO CUTE! Major kudos for absolutely NAILING the writing of small children.

With that, I'll ride off into the sunset now, but not without favoriting and following so I never miss an update again. I absolutely can't wait for more! Happy writing!

When is chapter 33 coming out?! I LOVE IT! I really want to see how Sonic was born! PLZ! I read a chapter every night to everyone in my family! PLZ upload again!

PLEASE MAKE DAT SONIC BORN! I WANT ALI TO JUST *POP* INSTA SONIC! I NEED THAT TO HAPPEN PLEASE! PLEASE UPDATE SUPER SOON!

Well, this is one of the longest fanfics that I have read. I loved! I like that you're very detailed describing the story and the characters, especially Jules and Charles. I love brotherly relationships!

Have a few months since you've updated. Are you going to continue? I'm very intrigued to know what happens next :(

I just wanted to let you know that I've only gotten to chapter three so far, but I have /really/ enjoyed what I have read! :-) I love the detail and dimension you put into these characters-they truly come alive, and the dynamic/contrast between Charles and Jules is priceless. XD I prefer this sort of spin on Sonic characters. I've actually been working on my own retelling, and it takes a different spin on these characters, but I REALLY like your version. (And I'm picky with Sonic). Enough that I've mentally canonized it. XD So-keep up the good work, and I'll keep on reading! Thanks! :-)

~Connie

*happy dance!*
The previous review was from me but my device must have logged me out or something. Perhaps I should start signing my name at the bottom...
Anyway, sorry to hear about Ant's poor mama. :-(
Another great chapter, as per usual and an interesting idea to possibly merge two characters. Look forward to see how that turns out!
(And yes, due to my great affection for Sonic, Tails and Knuckles, I am glad I found this story in time to get excited by this chapter! (Do I dare say that I might like those three slightly more than Shadow?...yes. *hides*))
Anyway...will be definitely losing sleep waiting for next chapter and making sure I'm SIGNED IN before reviewing. Thank you!
DaydreamingDuma

WAY PAST COOL

Ah, sorry about no reviews. I meant to get round to it but I got distracted with watching Sonic Boom (those rascals).
Anyhoo...
Yay! My little Soni...um...my...well...Sonic's on the way. Ahem.
Great chapter and I love the team! Having older characters resurface is always fun and I hope it carries on. I was wondering if ol' Snively was going to pop up or not but, hey, that's one question answered before it was asked.
Keep up the awesome work! (I was just about to hit the sack when the story alert came through and I thought...stuff it! Who needs sleep? ... I do. I need sleep. Night!)

Ah, very tasteful. Well done! Look forward to a new chapter! Did I hear mention of a possible Manic? Time will tell! Anyway, keep up the awesome work!

I love this story keep it up