Hi, it's an amazing fic, so sad you never continue it, I was looking forward to read it until the end, I have always feel Dumbledore to manipulative, all Sirius imprisoned and all... and his convenience silence and controlling aptitude... I plain Hate Hermione, Ron and Molly, Percy and mr weasley also plus Dumbledore ... And I really feel that The sly were condemned for prejudices and never seen as individuals
Draco... I love that boy for sure, as well as Ginny call me crazy but for me they make a perfect match even if they were never developed as the strong characters they could have been.
She was touched by darkness and in a way since then she should have seen the true of her mother and father ways, Molly seems the kind of madwoman that will throw Ginny to the closed guard if San mungo as soon she was out of her first year of Hogwarts, out of shame for the family name to be associate with a dark event... and I really hate the whole stupid idea of Ginny suddenly married to Harry who never pay and attention until the last minutes of the books so to speak...

Well... I really hope that you someday came back again and continue this amazing fic... please... if you do so... save Ginny that girl have more in the store than Rowling let out, I'm pretty sure she can make a difference since she is a 7 daughter so she must be more powerful that all give credit for.

Sorry if my grammar is not good enough... English is my second language and I learn it all by my self.

Are you going to continue this? I can't wait for more.

This is awesome and I really hope you finish it!
I like all the twists and I especially like the add on of Draco!

A great story. I look forward to reading more.

I don't like this. it's not ideanor is it your writting. I just don't care for this story.

learn how to separate paragraphs

okay so this chapter said pretty much same wat was said in chapter 1. repetitive...

This is the first long story I've attempted in a very long time...
You failed...

hmm in some way the story has potential it's good.
Good show some sides of other people what was going on, and forgot about the black will. Was hardly any bashing... and i would think hermione would be also under spells and what not if harry found it on it's own. Such a friend as her he should have her checked also, if not so and you wanted different hermione fine. But was really curious what to come of this new developments.

I thought the name growlburp was funny.
Read on!

Mcgonnigal- McGonagall
fault - vault
I apologize for being inconsiderate of how much time you have to work on these, and applaud you for being able to do these and be a mom at the same time, you are amazing! I just wanted to point these two words out, as small corrections that I thought you might want to be aware of. Sorry if you perceive me as being pushy, or inconsiderate, I just wanted to point these out... Sorry!
-Ase

I love this story, and I wish there was more.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

I don't want to be mean... but can you put the writing into more separate paragraphs

Three years without updating? Please continue, I'm completely addicted!