Reviews for Envy
mfgAnonymous chapter 1 . 9/7
in all honesty, after all the stupid, dangerous, crazy stuff the gods put him through, he deserves the best family of any demigod bc wow the fates really have it out for him don't they
Annabeth 958 chapter 1 . 8/20
... That you didn't make Jason a jerk and it was all so wonderful. I loved it!
Annabeth 958 chapter 1 . 8/20
Aww! It was great! I loved how you didn't make Jason jealous of Percy because of his position or power instead it was because family. And I loved that u didn't
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30
Great oneshot but it would have been even better if after that Annabeth said" But we don't have to be, just wait soon enough you all will be included in that family to. She and Paul take us all in, even if you don't ask"
MarbleWolf chapter 1 . 10/15/2019
loved this. wonderful story!
stranger1999 chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
this made me feel so emtional!few stories do that
NarutoLover777 chapter 1 . 5/6/2019
Fantastic. Felt like I was reading something by Uncle Rick himself, but with your own style intertwined. Absolutely amazing, keep up the good work because that was just wonderful.
Morning Songbird chapter 1 . 1/2/2019
It's everything
Fire and Ice 01 chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
That was nice and beatiful and sweet and amazing and awesome and wow. I LOVEDD IT! I LOVED EVERY WORD IN THAT AND EEVRYTHING ABOUT IT! AAAMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGG
kcbookslove chapter 1 . 5/16/2018
This has turned me onto a blubbering crying mess...
Thank you for such a beauty!
Calling it just a story is disservice to it.
Cello Belle chapter 1 . 11/23/2017
This was wonderful! I originally got here because one of my fav authors had you listed on her fav authors list and so I figured, why not! I'm so glad I looked at this! It was beautiful how you portrayed Percy interacting with him parents. That part with the baby had me on tears. And at the very end, I was smiling so much the people around me gave me weird looks. But who cares! :). This has to be the best one shot I've ever had the pleasure to read!
FanGirlToTheMax204 chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
I LOVE IT!
Birdlover52percabeth chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
That was very well written. Thank you.
Aeris21321 chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
I like this cause it's not your typical Jealous!Jason fanfic. While those are fun, it is nice to get one every now and then that really has more substance.
persassyjackson123 chapter 1 . 5/25/2017
pls update this is so good.
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