This was such a cute and heartwarming story, thank you so much for sharing!

I loved both exchanges. Serving up shade to Renee and the emotion moment with Chief Charlie.

That was sad. Poor Bella girl. Virgin sex is horrible.

Annie is amazing!

Oh mah gawd. I was laughing so hard my hubby was like “ what are you reading now? Let me see. Holy shit flesh colored crayon. She ate her gum off the floor.” This only opened the flood gates for more questions. Why did I share? Now I’m cranky like Bella when Kid doesn’t get something.

Brill! I mean really fucking fantastic!

What is in the water in Forks? Hehe.

Mama? Fucking genius!

There are so many crazy people in this. I love it! The nick names too.

Oh. Mah. Gawd. Bloody brilliant!

Charlie is hella cool. Are we going to find out why Bella has the tough exterior?

Seriously love the Chief and Bella’s dialogue here. And is Edward alright? ;-)

Laughing. Out. Loud.

So I’m loving this Bella and how she calls Edward the kid. Is Edward obtuse or is he pretending so he can break Bella down? Either way it seems to be working.

Freaking loved it! Couple of the first chapters I was little out of it but then the story took me in and I loved it! Laughed so much out loud! Love love love!