"We feel, Harry, that your misery is worth the long life you will have…how can you be happy when you are dead? Thus, your life was the priority." Oh sweet, that's my cue to stop reading this. It was painful enough already but your REASONING? Just...no.

I wanted to to kill all thnse who manupulated him. I am dissapointed.

... No. Just. No. Why bring Harry's sister in as another champion? that. that doesn't make any sense. She could have helped him from the sidelines, tried to reconnect with him by helping him, or simply talking to him, why would she enter the tournament? It is just unnecessary, I mean really? The story would actually be unique I'd she wasn't entered, why stick with the four champions if you could have made a well constructed and entertaining story with 3.

Also, I realize I'm basically only complaining in all of my reviews but I would like you to understand that I do like this fic. The sharingan has some interesting functions which are usually kept as a side benefit in most fics which you are exploring nicely, but! that doesn't mean I'm liking all parts of the story.

Sharingan? good
a darker Harry? good
but shoving Harry's sister in there while making it feel incredibly forced? no bueno man.

wel... that was something alright.

I like me some dark fics but this is a bit over the top even for me. I'll read another couple of chapter cause I'm curious about the rest of the story but if it doesn't tone it down a little I fear I'll get little enjoyment out of reading this.

My top 5 Harry Potter fics. I like you work Author San. I read Your "Birth of forest" Fic as well. Your work is absolutely amazing. I hope you will update this Amazing piece of Art. Thank you very much

I just read 1 chapter. I like this Fic. This is First time I read fic where Dumbledore does't despise harry. I mean those of Dumbledore bashing Fics. Thank you

Shame, really liked this fic. Gonna miss you

Shame he actually is down with another manipulator fucking around with him

Great story!

Holy shit this would be excellent as a one-shot then I see there are nearly 40 chapters :O

the moment he trusts anybody in this story I am dropping this then.

Came here for my annual reread. Harry's personality is a mess, but I like this fic.

Harry, in thsi story, is an absolute mess. While I can empathize with him for hating his family and Dumbledore for their abandonment and part in his torture, I do not understand how Harry is supposed to be the protagonist when he is a sociopathic sadistic hypocritie with no self-awareness or basic chain of logic. He degrades further and further as the story goes on, with his BAMF personality just becoming a pathetic soup of self-delusion and disproportionate revenge.

I couldn't read past chapter 9 due to his oppressive aura of 'being shit'. I know that protagonists don't have to be likeable but Harry... is Harry. He is an emo pseudo-reality bender, not a wizard. I get it, this is a crossover with a canon with powerful characters, but this just loses any sense of scale when Harry, harnessing the power barely equalling Minerva, is able to incapacitate a horde of 60 Year 6-7 students. With lightning. And he still pales in comoarison to Dumbledore, but is catching up? Even though Dumbledore has ~112 Years on him, and it is stated that most of Dumbledores strength comes from his skill?

TL;DR Good idea, Bad main, root-for-able villlian, Mediocre with a side of edge.

Please update. This is an amazing story.

will you be updating this fic anytime soon?