I know it’s still early in the story and hopefully she’ll stop being so high and mighty but damn she’s annoying right now

I really hope that before anything happens between Finnick and her she’s at least 16/17, because right now 1418 is just gross

A 14 year old can’t give consent so no, this isn’t consensual. This story is messed up and there’s some heavy self insert vibes.

omg this story was so well written and amazing I just love it so much

So sad Leon passed but we knew it was coming. Hope Hyperion finds an interest in his killer, that would definitely be justice.

I loved it!

I'm starting the next book now...

NOOOOOOOOO

I would rather if it had been Finnick...

Wow, I would have never thought that she'd be the one to kill him. And I LOVED Dom, awe that's so sad. btw, I love the urban setting u chose for the Games!

Are going to put Finnick and El together?

Interesting how you made the main character a Career. I don't think I've seen anybody do that before with an OC. I certainly haven't. Btw, I have a HG fanfic too if you'd like to check it out :-) It's called Safe & Sound.

This fic was sooo good! I finished it last night and I am just so happy that I can go and read the next one now! I literally couldn't put this down, so thank you! I literally ship Finnick with almost anything, and normally Finnick/OC pairings are a little boring or the OC isn't that likable, but I LOVE Elethea, she got on my nerves at first, but just enough! She almost made me want to keep reading! I loved seeing Finnick and Elethea's relationship grown and I can't wait to see what comes next for them!

Great story! I loved it! Can't wait to read the sequel :)

Mother of God, what you've written in these last ten chapters is fantastic.

The overwhelming dread of the Capitol's fist hanging over Elethea and Finnick, Hyperion's carnal brutality, Elethea's descent into a broken woman, it's all done on a purely amazing level. It's gut punch after gut punch, each hitting stronger than the last. There's so much feeling written here, and I can tell with each line that you've poured a ton into this.

Little things really make this story shine. Small blurbs, such as Elethea's nagging feeling that her brother's death is her fault here in the last chapter really show off the depth of her emotional journey in a single sentence.

I've been reading slowly, but I blasted through this entire ending arc. It's just so well done. Can't wait to get on to the sequel; you've got me hooked. Amazing story!