| Reviews for Constant Surprises |
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Scooderr chapter 1 . 12/31/2018 I know you marked this complete but it is an excellent start to a multi-chapter fic. |
Erica2401 chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 OMG Sharon just go for it! Cool story you did, thanks for writing it. I loved how they plat with each other and with others. I know you wrote it long time ago but... ️ |
MsSir chapter 1 . 6/27/2018 This was cute. Thank you for sharing (and may the muse be with you)! |
Idbrown chapter 1 . 7/6/2015 I really love where you took them. I read this story at least once a month hoping there's extra lines that I've missed. You really left it open for it to continue, I hope you do...great read! |
TheHamsterInMyMind chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 Oh my. I REALLY liked this. It was a nice catch-up fic, showing where they are now and the potential to where they are heading. I like all the interspersed surprises and that everything remained playfully light and pleasant through, and I DO hope that it works out even better than Sharon’s brain is expecting it to. ;D |
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 1 . 8/11/2014 The heart wants what the heart wants |
Megan429 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 Great writing. I really enjoyed how you went about their exploration seeing Sharon for who she was outside the office. Realizing that Sharon had a life and friends outside office, unlike herself. Then the realization that Sharon prefers women doesn't scare her and not appreciating the way the guy was looking at Sharon. While I don't think they need to become a romantic couple, I would love to see a friendship among the two explored. Again, I really enjoyed your writing. |
Tiffanyfrench chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 Soo good I loved it I hope you continue it would love to read about what happens next. |
JMN322 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 Yes, it's good. It'd be better if you wrote more though! |
frakkingblerg chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 OMG WHAT THE WHAT?! uhh, i'm not sure how you could have possibly not fulfilled the prompt requirements. not to mention, vodka shots and merlot - yeah, total way to my heart. this was pretty epic. while i love your sexy times, i really really really like your take on building their relationship and how you develop things (even in this situation, which for lack of a better term, was lightening speed to an extent). case in point, love thy neighbor. i think was great and does lend itself to a continuation. not only because i'm being a total selfish brat and want more, but because i think you've got a great start going. and its different enough from 'ltn' and 'ltg' that it would be so exciting to see what you do. now let me just fawn over this for a minute. fun, let your hair down sharon, PERFECTION. i could totally see this and it was amazing. [She ran her thumb over Brenda's ring finger. Her left ring finger.] - just kill me with the feelings, jesus. finally, reckless, ridiculous brenda just going for it - fjkdsla;fjdsfl;dsal;, loved it. xoxoxoxoxoxo, THANK YEW FOR SHARING. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 OH MY GODS! PLEASE write more! This was absolutely delicious! It was a fun way for them to tread into those murky waters, and their interactions are super adorable and quirky. Nice job! |
Texaschic1 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 Please consider continuing this story. Its off to a great start. |
Docile Boy chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 You have a real gift for description and memorable turn of phrase. Brenda and Sharon's mutual supportiveness was very sweet and domestic. I also appreciated Sharon cutting loose in this sort of low-key way - it was very believable and in character. Thank you for sharing! |
kinseya chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 Wonderful, more please! |
Immas13 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 This was great, I really hope you decide to continue! :) |