I’m trying to remember if i disliked movie Bella as much as I dislike her in this story. She is so selfish. I’m just going to blame it on her age. Luckily, your story makes up for her character flaws with an amazing portrayal of a Jasper. Hopefully their romance will change Bella for the better.

That was such a good story. The plot was so original and I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for writing it!

Thanks for writing this story.

Wow, great twist. Fantastic story. Thank you for sharing your words. Meg

I really enjoyed this story . Thankyou. It was a very original and interesting idea , I really wish it had gone slower and been longer. It felt a little rushed at times , but the quality of writing and creativity of ideas could have made for a rich and lengthy epic of a story.
Thanks for this and good luck with your writing in future.

You actually managed to write a likable Edward. I actually despise Edward, but you actually gave him a redeeming quality. Love all your stories

One of the best stories here. And I read so many. Michael character is brilliant

I’ve been reading FF so long that I’m sick to death of Edward & Bella. This first chapter is the first time in a very long time I’m intrigued.

xoxo,

B

Great end to a great story... With a bit of a sad note :(

Ok, I am totally not sure about the Edward 180 turnaround. I just can't trust him and really hope he won't let everyone down.

I think I have read all of your J&B stories and loved them all. I really like the plot set up for this one... At first I was not sure about the slight underworld twist but I trust it will work out to be great. I was disappointed that Bella didn't join the trip to Peter and Charlotte. But I guess Charlie has to work with Jasper for a bit before jasper would be ready for Bella.

loved this story

Great story

Is it Leah or needs to suffer.

Why doesn't her shield block Alice from seeing what they are doing and where they are?