Wonderful story i loved it please write more.

It was just as good reading it the second time, of not better. I probably would have finished soon if I had not been on vacation and been able to read all the time lol. I can’t wait to catch back up though, and while I liked your other stories, the story of jake cross will always be better in my option.

It’s been a year or so since I left off reading this at Arkham Rising and your other two stories, and I figured if I wanted to start back up again I’d start from the beginning. Just reading this chapter reminds me of how much I loved your stories and your writing styles, I can’t wait to catch up again :)

Cheshire is giving Red X the look of a woman who knows what she wants. However some part of her wants to be a "good" sibling to Artemis and not screw thing up. This is understandable as not only would Talia be on her if she interferes with Jake's "mission, her attraction to Red X (thief) is separate from Artemis' attraction to Jake Cross (school boy), meaning she doesn't have all of who he is to herself.

Red X & Raven are besties. I can see in the future their quick wit and dry humor between the two. Going to Happy Harbor will obviously up Jake's threat level against the Team and the League. Jade's jealousy for Jake's duo identity is somewhat understandable when you think of how heroes/heroines and villains/villainesses can't really show all of who they are to any person, even those in the same line of work.

So our favorite cartoon thief takes to the the shadows with the League of Assassins. Seeing him with Cheshire is like seeing a couple when they playfully argue about who has to do the chores. Also it is easy to see how they would hate their dads. In comics and cartoons Deathstroke and Sports Master were neglectful and abusive to their kids.

My third time reading this, and I still ship Jake a thousands time more with Jade than Artemis...

Not the point, but still... Anyway, I loved, or rather, love this story!

Although there are some flaws (same with every story), and despite my previous reluctance to read this due to the whole OC thing... I've got to admit, Jake is definitely a good OC, and I'm extremely biased on the matter because well, OCs... (I really should give OCs a chance)...

Uh yeah. Continuing on (I'm such a rambler), I love so much about this story! The plot and the relationship between characters... (Please write more Slade and Jake), and so much more!

Now then, off to Arkham Rising

While this isn't a bad story per say, it starts off too heavy with a lack of character buildup.

It's reminiscent of those older episodes from batman the animated series where an enemy has him on the brink of defeat and cuts away to the Intro Theme.

But it doesn't seem to work so well in this case.

wow man. you wrote the best red x story in fanfic. I read some good stories about red x, but none of them are as well written as yours. your story had me turning on my seat when reading it. I love the action and the drama. I must say it was a little fuck up that Jake cheated on artemis with her sister but it didn't feel really fucked when artemis started to cheat on red x with kidflash. for some reason that part really got to me. very good work on the story. I don't really review any of the stories. even the ones I like, but yours was so well written that was compelled to review.

Well, I prefer this son of Slade to the canon version so far.

Can I just say I spent three freaking days to read this?! MY EYES HURT! But it was so worth it! Best. Story. Ever!

Loved it!

I am starting to ship Jade with Jake ;)

Aweeesooommmeeeee!

Oooh! This story rocks! :D