Brilliant story.

No matter how many times I read this it still tugs at my heart. I just love it.

I must have read this for a hundred times but still each time a wistful sigh leaves my mouth. You really know how to write a story. It's so beautiful.

Great story, so glad I ran across a recommendation for it when I read another oneshot.

Love this story. Re read for 3rd time
Wish they could have got it right earlier but then it wouldn't have had the same effect or pull. Would like to know what else u have written. Thanks!

So Edward treats her like crap, scares the guys away from her, and when she can no longer date he ignores her for a slut?! He has sex with Tanya, meanwhile Bella has to remain alone and a virgin until Edward deigns her worthy?! This is just garbage.

Edward's attitude confused me at first, like Bella I thought he didn't like her, that he was annoyed around her hahaha
I really liked the story, specifically Edward.
XOXO

Love

Excellent story. Perfect angsty mess. I really enjoyed it, of course there could always be more, but I felt the story was complete. I loved the joy of the crowd when he finally went for it.

BEAUTIFUL!

Are you kidding? Edward treated her like crap. What is it with these girls? Why tell a kid if he/she is mean or picking on you that means they like you. Teach someone that growing up that's why people stay in abusive relationships.

Fantastic. Like, ridiculously fantastic. You're amazing and what you'ce created is amazing. And fantastic. Yeah

So wonderful!

amazing oneshot & beautifully written. Loved it!

Beautiful love it