Dear Author,
I was going through my favorite stories list today and saw your story. I know it has been a loooooong time since you posted and a looooong time since I last commented, but when I saw this I felt the need to remind you how truly excellent this story is. There are lots of works on , many that I have read and favorites, but none quite like this one. I don't remember what many of those stories are about. Sometimes it takes me re-reading a chapter to remember. Yet, all I needed was seeing the title of this story to remember it vividly. It was a wonderful journey and I want to thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you continued to write, and continued to share your art with the world.

Catcateightyeight

UH. POLICE? HOSPITAL? HELLO?! WHAT KIND OF SECURITY GUARD TAKES AN INJURED, SHADY GUY INTO THEIR PRIVATE ABODE WITHOUT EVEN REPORTING THE INCIDENT TO THE POLICE AND TRY TO FIND HIS FAMILY WHAT THE FUCK

eh. well. fanfiction is fanfiction and usuk is usuk. i love these dorks nonetheless

OMG LOVE THIS

-cries-

This was just a fantastic read, I’m still stunned even after having finished it!

Y'know, I get the feeling Arthur is gonna be in a dangerous situation, and Alfred saves him and ends up becoming an angel. Just a thought, though.

Not yet, hmm?

Yes. YES.
I swear, this is one of the most beautiful love stories that I've ever come across. Have I told you how perfect it is? Because it is. Emotional, beautiful, perfect. TRAGIC. How Francis always knew that Arthur was there, watching over him, and talked. How Arthur died to save Francis. It's amazing, really.
I could practically feel the fear, desperation, and determination rushing out of these words as I read them. I could FEEL it. And that's powerful writing.

Nice ending. It's satisfying. It's hard to believe that this is over, all of it. And it's amazing that this story is so long. I can safely say great job. There are thing in here that I would have done differently, and at times, it could get a bit dull, and lets not even start on the amount of sex scenes, (really), but still. Great writing. My favorite thing in here has to be Francis and Arthur's story. I would like to see more of that. I can tell that this is going to stay in my mind for a bit, and that's good. Thank you for writing.

Ivan! :D Even though it's only for a short while, I'm glad he's made appearance in here! Surprise Christmas party epic and totally awesome! I like how Toris is Ivan's boyfriend. It fits. ya know? This is definitely one of my favorite chapters.

I love the interaction you write between Lovi and Atonio. It flows so naturally, and is absolutely hilarious! I love that you've made them get married and how Lovi's softened somewhat. You've written both of them awesomely!

I feel like there's a timeskip coming soon, based off of 'whether the Council likes it or not, if he was ever ready to face Alfred, then he would do so.' This could mean months, or even years later when Arthur comes back to Alfred.
I do like Arthur's thoughts on love when he was sitting outside the council doors. Such simple sentences hold much truth.
It reminds me or Romeo and Juliet; forbidden love. :D

And so he leaves. Not as emotional as I thought it would be, and I think that he should have left a note, but this feels right. I have imagined Arthur leaving in a number of ways, but this one works well.
I like how you added the detail of the door being locked behind him so he would have to break in to return. I like how you write the small details.
Alfred won't take this well, I can tell. I can't wait to see how you write it. This story has been amazing so far. I really want to know how you got the idea; it's certainly interesting. Thank you for writing. :D

And so it begins. Finally. After obliviousness and sexual tension, we finally get it. YES. And I can't imagine it happening in a better way.

Well. Arthur's backstory is beautiful. Tragic. Amazing. I can see you writing a side fic off of it. I can't really find words for how amazing you've done. Seriously. I love the way you've described Francis. It's all so perfect, ya know? How Arthur died, his love, it all fits perfectly. It's amazing.
Francis's art and how he viewed the world are so fitting to France. I can't imagine a better way to portray him. I can't imagine him doing anything else in this position, especially how he talked to Arthur even after Arthur died. It's something he would do. Perfect. Simply perfect.